[Mr. J]

Pent uP,

So far Ive only read that opening verse but its been a very easy read.
the flow alongside those multis is really a winning combination..
that *who am I to them* switch up was pretty dope as well. so smooth.
I could pick any pair of lines out of this and find something I enjoy about it.
my only gripe is the *grass & twigs* part because it felt weird on my tongue.
otherwise after going back to finish the verse off it was a cool piece as a whole.
upon reflection its a great idea for the piece as it all unravels.
Nice to see you competing

Diablo,

This was pretty cool, it reminded me of the piece you did about a spider in the bathroom?
something like that anyway, the flow & the pace of the piece was quite amazing
the fact that you are able to create something out of something small is pretty impressive.
you ran with this idea in no time and thats what amazes me sometimes but it does come together too quick.
because you started out as the boy and then you change your perspective towards the ants
I dont know if this is a ploy for me to pretend that I am now the kid & as a kid Im making them think they are thinking this or not.
regardless this was a very impressive verse from start to finish. nice work.

v/After some consideration I can see the highs & lows from both verses.
the clashing of both the styles is very present within each opponent as well.
one relying on quick wit & motivation while the other focuses on flair & poetics
the thing that irks me sometimes is how to keep the piece going with each rhyme
I encountered that feeling within both verses & found myself conflicted with voting
like do I choose this one because of the way it was crafted
or do I choose the other based on how the flow took me elsewhere?
after thinking of each verse as a whole though I feel one took it based off of tenacity
which I feel Pent came more straightforward with while taking in the surroundings
I enjoyed the other verse but found myself twisted up in the execution.
the bouncing from perspective to perspective approach is hard to grasp at times.
causing me to have a sour taste in my mouth because it is a dope piece.
but the more polished captivated me & left me feeling somewhat thoughtful...

v/Pent