nothing maybe the teddy bear line
vs.
Leo
I could have been more lenient, but RPK had better execution throughout. Some of Jay's stuff was thrown off by shit that could have been edited out. Keep it as basic as you can while still getting the message across. readers will always prefer a verse that is easier to read, rather than one that makes it feel like a chore. Stay up.
V/RPK
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Me vs you only if that’s what it takes.
Battle to the death
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like a woolah what it do to one’s medulla oblongata- revenge of Montezuma on a blotter
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