[fraze]

Originally Posted by jilti

i play bball pick up games. his pick up game is lines on fat old dudes
then when its shirts vs. no shirts he's all Foreskin, hoping that gets exposed too
concept is there but the wording here is horrible
u'll go back & forth thru an axe then sword tip as i gut this whore
sure blowout, but when Tac On Another Point its not running up the score
too simple and the setup is a little forced. you would need a better flip for this wp to hit
in the prix u battled an unknown newb who's 0-2 & nearly lost there
Bard almost took u out. but i'd rather leave Tic in a box after that Bomb scare
best bar so far but a little wordy in the punch
tic tac top tier? not here. ur drunk or suffering from mad boredom
never be in the Discussion of Goatee, unless ur roasting baron x's pic in that forum
this is solid.
but accordin to some, ur future's bright w/ a little help my friend
could be the next Star,faggot.. if mods give aeros name to someone else again
too simple to hit hard.
u pucker lips & suck in while holding balls for center of balance
bitch been using the cupping method way before the Kylie Jenner challenge
aight I guess

Originally Posted by Tic Tac

Last wk was a Test if you’d show ya ugly faggot mug, I gagged inside
Not only did you Pass w/ Flying Colors…you held the fuckin flag with pride
nice flip
Your Feng Shui is off, so I’ll end ya life when I spout the chrome
Fuck a funeral. I’ll leave pieces of you in every room…That’s makin ya house a home
like the concept but don't like how the punch was worded
Ugly Mexican cowboy never touched a girl, you’re doomed serpent
By the time Europa bitch, mankind’ll discover life on that moon’s surface
dope
You’re low tier trash. Just quit now & flee from denial
I mean, you had a good run as a Newbie…til you lost to me in the finals
solid personal but not a hard hitting punch
LA coward. You ain’t gangsta, I’ll take a bat w/ 1 knock & you’ll plummet
There’ll be so much blood, it’ll make the Santa Barbara spill look like a drop in the bucket
this is nice
Latino immigration reform…a shifty cunt…& a Bitch for certain
If you're not Clinton, then explain why you fit that description perfect
I get the concept but didn't really like this

This was pretty one sided imo. Jilti had a couple bars (baron x, bomb scare) but he seemed a little outclassed here. Tic Tac didn't really have any bad misses while jilti had a few. Didn't like Tics closer but still a solid verse overall. Jilti you should try to tighten up your wording, you had some good concepts that missed from poor wording.

vote tic tac