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Dominate
The fact that it came from left field and didn’t rhyme, just made it look like u were being lazy af and just needed an ending so you did that… ur right w the reveal…. It should have been introduced better, or eluded to in the main body, or conceptually bounced off his character before it went straight to him esp with no rhyme scheme like I said… like u could have introduced a whole new scheme if you wanted to set it apart. It just could have been worked in a lot better imo.