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Old 07-31-2017, 08:19 PM   #15
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this is cool. Word to whoever said the shit about you're breath control. It's not bad, it's actually good. But when I used to rap I'd change up the flow and double time and slow it back down again a lot so I'd have to go back in and edit out me catching my breath. You left them in. A little clean up would go a long way. Other than that I dug this.
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