Beans
You have the idea of battling. You need to focus on wording your concepts a lot better bro. They lack the insult'ish vibe and come off really statement'ish. I mean I read them and I'm like, ok. I'm suppose to be like, damn or wow that's fucked up or even chuckle off a joke or 2. So when you come off with a concept try and focus and a witty insult to go with it.
Allen
I actually liked you verse. You dropped the usual, all thou it seemed rush and a lot of concepts could have been worded differently, you dropped enough for the W. I liked the Isreal wp. That was cool and the rissian was cool as well. All though I've seen that wp flipped a lot, you gave it a pretty cool twist.
V/Allen
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