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Old 01-31-2013, 03:58 PM   #2
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this was cool, i just feel like you'd be way better if you used punctuation marks
when your writing these drops, it makes it much easier to follow flow and read
it just looks like a bunch of run on sentences without any..
let your lines explain themselves, you shouldnt need to explain in these type of
drops...just a little feed, homie....good shit tho
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