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Old 03-26-2015, 04:09 PM   #6
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Patrick: Technically it'd be her filmography and not her discography, you doofus. Besides that this was awesome. I think we actually talked about collabing on a porn verse before but it never happened for some reason. I had the name picked out and everything. "BangBros". That's fucking brilliant, just like this shit you just dropped. It was cool. Rhyme's were rad as always. I chuckled at the 'picky' line. Cool stuff. Porn is awesome.

Defiant: The last line was the best in this, you fucking cannibal. The other lines were hurt by one or two syllables being out of place and stretching the flow a bit too much for my taste, and if the syllable count was perfect the line was just too plain. I just don't think you did enough to beat Pat this week.

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