Netcees - View Single Post - Week 1: Innovator vs. Dove Dozer [Dove Dozer wins, 8-4.]

CopyPat · 10-03-2014, 09:47 PM

wow. really impressed with ur verse DD. your wording was crisp as fuck and you laced the multi's and inner rhymes effortlessly. even from just a technical standpoint i think u easily won this. but beyond that, the verse itself content wise painted much more of a picture and told a decently interesting story. i got dove by a LONG shot in this one

inno this didn't seem like your best effort. it felt rushed or not cared about.. maybe the picture just didn't do anything for u but your verse just seemed lackluster.. the rhyming/flow was unimpressive and the story, if there even was supposed to be one, was just weak. almost seemed like u were trying to write a poem or something... just did Not grab my attention at all. dove smoked u on this one

V/ Dove doozy

10-03-2014, 09:47 PM	#4
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742221	wow. really impressed with ur verse DD. your wording was crisp as fuck and you laced the multi's and inner rhymes effortlessly. even from just a technical standpoint i think u easily won this. but beyond that, the verse itself content wise painted much more of a picture and told a decently interesting story. i got dove by a LONG shot in this one inno this didn't seem like your best effort. it felt rushed or not cared about.. maybe the picture just didn't do anything for u but your verse just seemed lackluster.. the rhyming/flow was unimpressive and the story, if there even was supposed to be one, was just weak. almost seemed like u were trying to write a poem or something... just did Not grab my attention at all. dove smoked u on this one V/ Dove doozy __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.