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Old 03-16-2014, 08:04 PM   #7
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Phone just fucked up after trying to post my breakdown smh
but short vote, timeless you had a strong verse and did well with the story and imagery.
Oats you also had a strong verse with storyline and imagery.
the big difference and my reason for voting for OATS was the flow. I felt timeless could have used a few more inner and multie rhymes to pull the upset
vote oats
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