Netcees - View Single Post - Week 3: oats (2-0) vs. timeless (2-0) \\ oats wins 10-0

patrown · 03-17-2014, 01:35 AM

timeless - LMFAO really? ... good shit. i liked how you poked fun at general morality and danced around stereotypes. it was enjoyable. the end was a little.. out there, i don't really "get it" if you will, but i got the basic gist of where you were going. and i appreciate the direction you pointed me at.
liked the imagery here..
With a nod, it ashed out a joint and replied, “I am Sasquatch.”
I nearly shit… felt tighter than coils deep inside of a padlock.
these lines hit home hardest for me this week out of anybodys ... period..
“So even though your kind is accepted, you’d still rather hide?”
“It’d be wise, I’ve grown accustomed to this type of shattered life.”

oats- really liked this set and had to quote before i finished..
As a child I was told they were great seekers of Truth -
(they were lies, I supposed, but don’t hold me to my youth!)
they were teachers and prophets, the keepers of knowledge
clinging to secrets for solace from their meagerly proofs
^verr niice
oOoo...
this one was facing down at me with a placid, distinct grin
the smug desperation of a beast who couldn’t fathom extinction
ahhhh...
sticking to a topic and .. making the piece into a metaphor, or saying something further than what one might've expected getting into it, was appreciated. many thanks.

/v oats - he not only outrhymed his opponent, but he actually had a pretty cool story that stuck out to me this week. if timeless' character had said something more profound then "fuck your life" at that key moment in his verse, i truly believe, with all sincerity, he would've gotten the win this week. great effort from both. nice reads, many thanks.

03-17-2014, 01:35 AM	#10
patrown ‹^›ô¿ô‹^› Join Date: Feb 2013 Posts: 596 Battle Record: 13-19 Rep Power: 0	timeless - LMFAO really? ... good shit. i liked how you poked fun at general morality and danced around stereotypes. it was enjoyable. the end was a little.. out there, i don't really "get it" if you will, but i got the basic gist of where you were going. and i appreciate the direction you pointed me at. liked the imagery here.. With a nod, it ashed out a joint and replied, “I am Sasquatch.” I nearly shit… felt tighter than coils deep inside of a padlock. these lines hit home hardest for me this week out of anybodys ... period.. “So even though your kind is accepted, you’d still rather hide?” “It’d be wise, I’ve grown accustomed to this type of shattered life.” oats- really liked this set and had to quote before i finished.. As a child I was told they were great seekers of Truth - (they were lies, I supposed, but don’t hold me to my youth!) they were teachers and prophets, the keepers of knowledge clinging to secrets for solace from their meagerly proofs ^verr niice oOoo... this one was facing down at me with a placid, distinct grin the smug desperation of a beast who couldn’t fathom extinction ahhhh... sticking to a topic and .. making the piece into a metaphor, or saying something further than what one might've expected getting into it, was appreciated. many thanks. /v oats - he not only outrhymed his opponent, but he actually had a pretty cool story that stuck out to me this week. if timeless' character had said something more profound then "fuck your life" at that key moment in his verse, i truly believe, with all sincerity, he would've gotten the win this week. great effort from both. nice reads, many thanks. Last edited by patrown; 03-17-2014 at 01:39 AM.