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I will collab with you. I'll hit you with a PM. Your other drop showed you were self-conscious of your own writing.. A very good first step. Be conscious of where your end rhymes and inner rhymes interact. If you break up individual lines into comma'd sections, it gives you more control over flow and emphasis on certain words.

The "what's your method of mayhem, I'll tel you what mine is" was a really cool line. Word choice was nice. Keep keyin, keep up, stick around, all that.