Timeless wrote his verse like a key that was supposed to unlock Pandoras box? Clever. Unintentional?possibly. This was meager, by all means. I didn't like anything in particular about it aside from the key like symbolic idea of a verse rresembling a key that unlocks Pandoras chestt. This was by all means mediocre and I couldn't care for it enough to ponder must past that. Always next week though, keep experimenting.
King Ra came through miniscule on a grand scale but still ignited the senses with a galatic saga of sorts. I liked this part
Quote:
Silver lining in clouds? Golden image.
Spiritual alchemy.
Solar eclipses. Galaxies.
Universal depth vast & deep.
The door to Heaven is past our reach,
but close to the heart.
The Source of it all. Lies inside where hopes a visage.
A mirage of the divine, ignited from the start.
You'll enter the light once you exit the dark.
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A planetarium like verse.
Vote goes to, without further Ado, King Ra