figured i should feed this since i no showed.. my bad again, just got busy.. ill prob finish and post at a later time, i took the life of ghengis khan route.. anyways to the feed. loved how this started off bro, jumped straight into the action and put a vision of battle in my head. wish you would have developed the characters story a little more but i know you were tryin to stay in that minimum line limit. as far as storyline, structure and your scheme.. flawless as usual. i like how you try to get that whole line to rhyme in places. anyways dope drop man.
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