timeless' piece
hawt
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Soft spoken with her thoughts broken, soaked in rum and misery.
Humming symphonies...
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No adrenaline left for the fight, pedaling West through the night.
Landscapes changing so she settles in...
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love the flow on these parts. I guess I have a specific way my inner voice reads things and this made it happy.
nawt
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Awaiting a flashback, or a simple answer to her questions.
Masses need a lesson as fast as a panther in progression.
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just, a weird phrasing to me for that last bit.
unbornbuddha's piece
hawt
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Thought I was forever divine, a beautiful sexual design.
Illusions of grandeur had my head in the sky
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really wanted "a beautiful sexy design" :'3
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But, by that time it’s too late, homeostasis collapses.
This self-regulating life form turns into a fatal contraption
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I don't usually like big words but it was nice.
nawt
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Until that moment came, where my health declined.
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dunno. me no likey.
mvgt: timeless for a more… my kind of cadence.