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Jesus this is a close call for me. On one hand, the originality of Zygotes story compels me to easily side with him, but I cannot deny the fact that bents piece is extremely well written. I am more keen to bents style of writing, so I may be biased from that standpoint if I were to say his verse is better written than zygotes. I'll have to say zyg that your verse read just like a speech, just as it shouldve.

So theres no denying both of your abilities to write, but I'll have to go with zygote here, for a more interesting concept.