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Old 05-19-2014, 12:55 AM   #8
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The homie Split. Despite all the challenges, you still managed to drop, so respect. Especially since this is a champ match. While this wasn't you at your best, it had that feel of what to expect from a Split Eight verse. Even though you wrote short lines and in a broken like style, the writing read very smoothly, and I actually enjoyed the read. I thought the tone fit the picture and you weren't off at all. Zombie, you held your own in this one. Wrote this like you wanted this championship, even though you're signing out next week. You clearly are one of the best in this league. The depth of imagery and description was top notch and it read smoothly. This was just great from start to finish. A lot of great lines. You really painted a clear picture and detailed an in depth perspective of the picture given. Great job.

Zombie clearly took this match with the votw. Superb level of writing. Split didn't bring due to personal reasons, but still wrote a solid piece.

MVGT: Zombie. Good job by both competitors.
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