CASHIUS THE CALCUTTA WP HAS BEEN DONE X100 U SHOULD HAVE LEFT THAT OUT OF YA VERSE..OTHER THAN THAT IT WAS COOL..THE OPENER WAS FRESH AND FUNNY..ONLY THING I'D SAY IS TRY SWITCH UP YOUR DELIVERY CUZ UR STARTING TO GET LAZY AND EXECUTING EVERY BAR THE EXACT SAME...GETS BORING..OX YOUR WORDING IS KILLING YOU..HAVE A LOOK AT HOW SOME OF THE TOP HEADS WORD THEIR BARS..FLUIDITY IS KEY...MAKE IT SOUND NATURAL...WEED OUT THE BASIC SPELLING AND GRAMMAR ERRORS AND YOU'LL BE SURPRISED AT HOW MUCH EASIER IT GETS..YOUR CONCEPTS WERE OKAY BUT YEAH..THE NOT WELL RECEIVED WAS A NICE FLIP..KEEP DOING MORE LIKE THAT..CASHIUS WINS
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