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namix · 04-01-2013, 10:15 AM

Ox - liked the concept of not well received because its so effin true, money for nursing family members, i liked that. i seen so many flips on neverland in the day - your other concepts would have resonated a bit more with stronger wording, bring your punch into context in the setup a bit better, and some of those would have hit a bit more effectively.

Cash- lmao @ the paul bunyin reference, nice. pole ox was a good concept that woulda been doper with a bit tighter wording, but still funny. was the 'cal' part of the 'calcutta' representing 'gal', mighta been a bit of a stretch there. overall still def. got it with better execution and a couple zingers in there. lotb - babe blue ox lol, good shit.

vote- cashius

04-01-2013, 10:15 AM	#11
namix been that, done there. Join Date: Jun 2001 Posts: 2,260 Battle Record: 2-1 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 85246652	Ox - liked the concept of not well received because its so effin true, money for nursing family members, i liked that. i seen so many flips on neverland in the day - your other concepts would have resonated a bit more with stronger wording, bring your punch into context in the setup a bit better, and some of those would have hit a bit more effectively. Cash- lmao @ the paul bunyin reference, nice. pole ox was a good concept that woulda been doper with a bit tighter wording, but still funny. was the 'cal' part of the 'calcutta' representing 'gal', mighta been a bit of a stretch there. overall still def. got it with better execution and a couple zingers in there. lotb - babe blue ox lol, good shit. vote- cashius __________________ well fed.