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Old 08-04-2013, 08:58 AM   #7
Animosi T
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Your L's many, your neck on the line plenty an flo ready to snap it
Methodone left you so shook was lookin like you missed your last dose of that shit
First line was alright, second was a bit off/not hard hitting. Wording hurt ya.

I get fit bitches loins stirrin, you only know one bitch called mum
If a bitch stirrin when she cauldron... she got warts, boils an working the magic on her own son
First line was kinda wack/played, second was a decent, cool wordplay. But, wording was off a bit around the end, and the punch wasn't that great.

Talking bout how Meth left you shook, this match up had me crying
I ain't lying, I can't bear seeing any mo'ronic attempts at rhyming
Was a good concept, but stop trying to force the internals. It's too filler. You were 'crying' that just sounds stupid and like you are trying to get the internals to rhyme too hard. Nice wordplay though

this faggot must be smoking rock, if he thinking he will win round 2
no one respects rolling stones.... But then thats exactly what Ron Wood do
Ehh, wasn't feeling the punch in here. Not a great attempt at the wordplay.

This comp can bring rep, make champs, look at sharp nine
You got no chance, in 9 matches time we'll still be waiting for you to deliver one sharp line!!
Wording wasn't great. Sharp nine/Sharp line, not feeling the double rhyme. But, decent concepts, alright closer.



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Flo Real? No deal. Knucklehead you can have him back, dude
When I said I wanted the tits, I didn't mean that boob
Weak opener, no real punch in here.

What a fuckin queen - a thug g ain't tha man he be
Is that the Real life? Nah, it's just his fantasy
Not much of a punch here again. Don't try to force the multis, it backfired here and left you w/o a pnuch and a weak line.

Had your ex girly hittin on me, she was caught hook, line and sinker bro
But I tuna stinkin bitch out coz only dead fish go wit tha flo
First line is played. Then, second was wack. Wording murked you here, my man.

I get honeys wit that code x, Flo couldn't pull em with a slow jam
Media shows that Real Player... coz no-one fucks wit that program
Not much of a punch, wordplay/name play wasn't strong.

Dude knows he aint all that, even he won't believe them lies n trash
Now who ironic, Real lost to a Storyteller in a swag & flo match!
Ok attempt at personal, but was executed badly.


I got Flo Real taking this.

Had more consistency, and the punches hit a bit harder for me. Both need to work on wording, and getting punches in.

2-1 Flo Real
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