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Pinot Grij · 03-12-2016, 02:42 PM

Vote -- Orc

Schad - mostly light hits. I look forward to some solid lines from you each week, but this was a pretty pedestrian effort this time around. That under the bed line was funny, but seemed a bit like too little, too late.

Orc - just more direct hits.. the opening 4 were dope.. his beard doesn't really come to a point, so I didn't like that line. Closer was heat. More polish overall.

03-12-2016, 02:42 PM	#13
Pinot Grij Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 863 Battle Record: 23-19 Accomplishments - OM HOF Champed - Fight Night 2 - Write Week V - Netcees Battle League (2x) - Winter Topical II - 1-2 Punch league Rep Power: 29195060	Vote -- Orc Schad - mostly light hits. I look forward to some solid lines from you each week, but this was a pretty pedestrian effort this time around. That under the bed line was funny, but seemed a bit like too little, too late. Orc - just more direct hits.. the opening 4 were dope.. his beard doesn't really come to a point, so I didn't like that line. Closer was heat. More polish overall. __________________ Topical C.R.E.A.M.