07-02-2014, 03:34 PM
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Alvin Karpis
You gonna flop like Wade, you claim ya white and not the same
You say you're Hubie Brown.....well I guess you do talk a lot of game
Ehh...
The way you get emotional over a photo makes me wanna spazz quick
Honestly I hope I never see a pic of this dick, save that shit for Chyeahhh’s chick
This was weak...
You always been average, your whole careers just an awkward blur
If we did a Mount Rushmore of the best, you’d be using the coin operated binoculars
This was ok.
Have ya chick snorting lines, I didn’t know she was a freak bitch
I pulled her hair and forced that Rail like I’m on some Greed shit
Ummm, not sure what you're talkin about here...
Ya bitch loves to swallow me whole and I’m fine w/ that
I’ll grab a Penn and Teller to write down how she makes it disappear like their acts
Ok.
You aint winning 5 that’s fact, we all know you’re the worst fake
& will never call this bitch Cari Champion unless it’s on the First Take
Ok.
Deep down you’re soft, ya whole persona seems wild to me
I got this bitch w/ an ass like Kapri Styles, you just style capris
Seen these types of concepts done a lot.
You’re snitchin on ya whole hood, I can’t respect it G so fuck it
Let me find out you been wearing those wires like a DIRECTV puppet
Eh...
Do that Hi bye shit in Far rock, ya whole hood wouldn’t let you step thru
I mean shit ask Orc, you’re such a Shamrock don’t even respect you
This was dope.
I’ll call my shooters to come see ya squad, it’s time to ante up
I’ll have Kings team on ice in NY but I don’t mean the Stanley Cup
Dope.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by King Karaoke
Hi...
Pocahontas left u cuz u couldn't handle it properly
I guess the reservations she had weren't just her family's properly
Cool.
Break up got u mad, pissed that u guys are no longer going steady
Wanted payback but u cant teepee her house if she lives in 1 already
This had potential. I think if you would have worded this differently, it would have been dope.
Ill catch u where u live and beat u till blood stains the carpet
That bat'll be flying all over the crib, u'll think it was YDK's apartment
I'm assuming YDK posted some kind of thread in discussions in regards to having a bat in his apartment? Yea?... Yea... Didn't like this...
Your gun bars aren't believable, don't even lie you con
Cuz the only time you bust caps is when you try them on
Lol, slap at best...
Dome as big as the 1 the rams play in, ur what Stewie would look like as an adult
Ur not a boss but u'd be a good Leader, if Marvel ever makes another Incredible Hulk
Nah...
That bitch shit u pulled years ago is the reason y not alotta cats respect u
A lot verses were lost on netcees 1 but were u deleting urs way b4 Lama had a chance to
Could have been flipped better, IMO. Worded softly.
Always flipping my shit, if it wasn't for me u wouldn't be decent bro
Why respect u? when u used the same Strikta line I used weeks ago
Solid personal. I'm assuming your talkin about the Glory Hole, yea?
Blame it on the alcohol, u get props on bars only when u take mine
We didn't have to know abt ur DUI's to see that u cant walk a straight line
This was nice.
Biting isn't paying homage, everyone considers it theft
Should change his name to Tracy Morgan the way this joker gets rear ended to death
He didn't die, so this missed for me.
Shots'll leave this queer dead when my niggas put guns to his weird head
Ill have so many hair triggers at your chin, u'll be able to post in the beard thread
Not feelin' this, tbh...
Bye...
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OVERALL: A pretty solid battle here. I notice Kar uses a lot of discussion references when he battles, used a lot of them in this verse alone and I believe any other verse I peeped from you, you had used some discussion references as well. I mean, not a fan of that but if your going to attempt it, you have to try and word that shit as harsh as possible, which I think here you failed too do. Some of those references weren't worded to their full potential and that for me killed a lot of the effectiveness on your PUNS. Anyways, Karp's verse was ok, not too many misses. A lot of his concepts were basic, no real creativity to them but what helped bring out his concepts was smooth wording. His verse was well written and even tho his punches weren't haymakers, he had enough jabs in there to hold it down. So w/ that being said...
v/A Karp.
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