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Old 08-26-2018, 01:01 PM   #8
DynamiCz
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Heard u flippin dough but not the green kind, u never caught bodies in the yard
He Red Gang for his clan? Riight we know that's just ur fav. Magic the Gathering card

This was decent here, kinda confused with the wording

Funny u play fantasy games cuz its WILD to say the odds are stacked against me
U hood? but the only place u'd see B in red if The Game was rollin thru in his Bentley

This was coo here

Won a finals in a league sum don't recognize tho, don't go flexin bro
With me? Ur story will start and stop in the first hr like a television detective show

Lol this was also coo

Think I give a fuck about a status? I know I'm the boss of this
Wet up a fresh Body, that Voss is crisp, ya last move being ya fam...when they cross ya wrist!


Wording stretched here a bit, but not really feeling this here

You just lost to the new guy, oh my now watch as ur stats spiral...
Won't be too obv. cuz I just caught Dys Body in the end n' that's Final!

Light impact on the closer...decent at best tho


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I’ll catch Bolo under a streetlight & let this shit fire...
It’ll remove his features & leave his face on a pole like a missing kid flyer

Cool opener here

I only do headshots...u can tell from my beam stature
U sleeping but this stick is above ur dome like it’s part of a dreamcatcher

I seen this concept a few times, it was decent tho…

He’s down in the dumps. But I’ma let this hobo hear it
This 12 gauge is so pumped up...it could help raise this nigga Bolo spirit

Lmao this is nice!

I’ll grab a clip & take ALL ur shit so please don’t act stun
One shot to the hip will end ur career…& this Raider will leave Bo Jackson

Ehh, this is ok...I like the nameplay off Bo Jackson tho

I’ll take this fool’s gold. The burner blazing ur frame bro
Then I'ma dump ur body 'over a hill' just cuz u were chasing the reign Bo

Lmao this is actually fiya!



Props on both verses here, this was a cool read here. Bo verse was coo, just had to get his wording down packed and make his punches sting a bit. Body verse was also coo, had some misses in there and then had some nice nameflips and there better overall verse.

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