Karpis:
Opener just ok
Compliment line is ok, not really a diss though.. it was just vaguely uncomplimentary
Soda wp is played af but that was done entertainingly nonetheless.
Clouds shit is funny af.
Golden Eye was a cool concept, but execution seemed off.
Not feeling closer.
vs
Swerve
"Leaves me rattling" is a weird setup, ruined the punch for me.
I dig the Wahoo line, but unless I know that his girl is Indian, it doesn't make sense to me. It's also another logo bar, which you drop in every battle.
Bail out is corny.
Zorro is eh.
Alveoli is bad.
ehh.
This sucked, honestly. I understand you're both in the Winter Classic and probably directed more attention towards that because you're both doper than this showing. Only line that really went connected for me was that clouds shit. That was funny.
Vote -- Alvin Karpis
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