This was a dope as battle forreal.
vivid you impressed with the creativity and imagery describing the video game while including more than one topic. The flow was decent but a few stretched/forced multies had me rereading once in a while. Solid drop tho I expected the ending pretty early on.
RA easily the closest to the take I was debating on this week. I guessed the ending about halfway through because its how I would have ended it lol flow an multies were on point but the emotion really brought me into this piece.
A very close battle but I gotta vote for the one I preferred and related to more which is RA.
Good shit fellas
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