This was an awesome battle.
Dead man, you really never cease to amaze me, everyone of your pieces ive read have been technically perfect with a beautiful flow but also never seem to be lacking in the vocab department. No different here, i loved every bit of this piece. The park the car for comfortable silence was a dope line and pretty relatable to most young guys (or when we were young). I think what makes a great writer is the ability to connect to the reader on a personal level whether it be past experuences or just taste in general and you do that very well.
Nigma, this was also a really great piece. I don't know if im a fan of a super multi and inner filled piece tbh, sometimes to it it comes off as a little choppy and repetitive. Not only that i had a hard time trying to decypher a few parts.. for example the part oats mentioned, i didnt understand it. There was definitely more positives than negatives but i don't think it was enough this time.
Mvgt dead man
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