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Old 10-17-2015, 11:57 PM   #1
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AOWL Season V, Week 13


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Tuesday at 9 P.M. Pacific/West Coast or Tuesday 11:59 PM Eastern / 6:00 AM Wednesday Central European/London
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Verses MUST be a minimum 10 lines or a maximum of 48 lines (or 650 words).

Votes are due Friday at 4:00 p.m. Western / or Friday 7:00 PM Eastern / 1:00 AM Saturday Central European/London Failure to vote will result in automatic sign out for the next week.

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Old 10-18-2015, 02:39 AM   #2
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They give me the Enigma out of all people lol goodluck man
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Old 10-19-2015, 11:30 PM   #3
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my dear Margaret
see pain within your saddened face

hazards, mistakes
a grandeous occasion
branded insane
this the axis of hatred
in my hands a grenade
and it blasts in our faces
handed him pain
in an active vocation
lathering paint
falling back in rotation
hes fastened to stay
and his casket is sacred

time talks. after ticking it flies on from the flight docks
drafted from non-fiction like mein kampt as the light dawns

i've got
the soul of pocahantus how i take a breath and paint the wind
know the growth will haunt us, erode subconscious, we'll break within
take our portraits down, we faded to a 'grains of dust' existence
mistake is saying love's the greatest drug because such is fiction
i woke up melancholy as the morning showers are pouring down
already mourned for hours, now horrors crowding this corpses shroud
hes the one who keeps me from you, im teachin him, no thwarts allowed
ground him how i'll turn his family tree to the stumps of orphans. wow
found him as he comes towards you, struck a stone and the sport is down
staring candid onwards, his hands are falling, yupp, quartz renowned
now,
pain contorts his brain, makes his drained endorphin's morph to smiles
scorn him, reflect the stains i'm left with, my destinies uncorked and wild
he possessed eclectic taste and what i guess is a respective nature
i set them in a separate tank to forget, and suppressed the vapors
placed the mask on his unconscious lips which twitched and quivered
think you'll hold her hand again? im a damaged thing. now this delivered
painted death with a ghastly stroke. drops are bleeding, hes off to sleep
his empty throat was flowing Godly, spawned water cleaner than Aquafina
then i let the sparks deploy, pyrotechnic burns he is not avoiding
this fills my solemn void like electric currents in solenoids
the way this calms my joints, i still ponder why. they're all toxic choices
its kept at awkward points like the rhombus box that i rock his groin with

and still, it takes me back to the days. i miss them.
our created symbiotic relationship still in the baby days
i lay here wishing and fading. twisting, insane
spinning, drifting away with awakened wisdom

we used to gaze across the stars amidst a cosmic shower
i used to plow her with the mojo of rastafarian austin powers
when time is on your side the hurts submerged and devoured
mine began to circle downwards with my personal power
the laws of attraction are like the curse of a magnet
and the flaws are often dragged inside your personal baggage

pleading for reunion. dreams you lose, the feud i've smothered
i cheated on you but now sought, and killed your new found lover

love you
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