Why Yall still Sleep Tho?!...

Camp Bell · 01-31-2013, 11:19 PM

i go all out with nobody's style
maneuvering the smoothest rants
my flow foul, loads of body counts
introduce me as the nudist, camp..
my super hands control the crowds
amusing, juiced an amped, homie clowns
inducing buddhist chants, i'm so holy cow
ruthless and advanced, abuse is in my plans
sitting on the throne and holding the crown
in my blood, im hoarding secrets to flooding forums
chromosomes growing wild, so im dumping portions
mine compared to dull boy, im denying the forcing
why compare me to dull...boy, writing IS boring!
until i die, i'll provide rhyming in giant proportions
can the pius afford this righteous assortment of typing
fighting with poor sins trying for forbes list, uninvited?
my violent endorsements requires survivors to forfeit
call riot enforcements, its the triumphant wordsmith
goliath, tyrant since birth was my psychiatrist version
yo highness, flying in first, designing the worst wording

Sharp · 01-31-2013, 11:57 PM

Cool drop. Definitely did a lot of growing in and of itself. Noticed that your vocabulary reall got going in the second half, grew the piece big time. What really stood out for me was the increasing bar length. That coupled with your wording and increasing use of multis as it progressed really made it feel more intense as in went on.

can the pius afford this righteous assortment of typing
fighting with poor sins trying for forbes list, uninvited?
my violent endorsements requires survivors to forfeit

that was slick as fuck. Keep it up bud

Flow · 02-01-2013, 06:05 AM

Going to have to agree with Sharp on the structure and what not. Really like the build up and intensity as it went along.

Thought the multis were spot on couldn't suggest any difference, wp solid.

If I had to make a critisism, its that it was too short. Would of been nice to have kept building it, an then even gone back on it self and start going shorter lines again. I was just starting to really enjoy it when it ended. You had my attention and wasted it. But then I suppose the best things come in small packages.

Anyways nice drop fam.

01-31-2013, 11:19 PM	#1
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	Why Yall still Sleep Tho?!... i go all out with nobody's style maneuvering the smoothest rants my flow foul, loads of body counts introduce me as the nudist, camp.. my super hands control the crowds amusing, juiced an amped, homie clowns inducing buddhist chants, i'm so holy cow ruthless and advanced, abuse is in my plans sitting on the throne and holding the crown in my blood, im hoarding secrets to flooding forums chromosomes growing wild, so im dumping portions mine compared to dull boy, im denying the forcing why compare me to dull...boy, writing IS boring! until i die, i'll provide rhyming in giant proportions can the pius afford this righteous assortment of typing fighting with poor sins trying for forbes list, uninvited? my violent endorsements requires survivors to forfeit call riot enforcements, its the triumphant wordsmith goliath, tyrant since birth was my psychiatrist version yo highness, flying in first, designing the worst wording __________________ get high. write rhymes.

01-31-2013, 11:57 PM	#2
Sharp HE / HIM / FRAC Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: PA Posts: 11,592 Battle Record: 56-21 Accomplishments - 50+ Wins Champed - The Ultimate Writer - NBL Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12601535	Cool drop. Definitely did a lot of growing in and of itself. Noticed that your vocabulary reall got going in the second half, grew the piece big time. What really stood out for me was the increasing bar length. That coupled with your wording and increasing use of multis as it progressed really made it feel more intense as in went on. can the pius afford this righteous assortment of typing fighting with poor sins trying for forbes list, uninvited? my violent endorsements requires survivors to forfeit that was slick as fuck. Keep it up bud

02-01-2013, 06:05 AM	#3
Flow Upset Champion Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: West Mids Posts: 3,861 Battle Record: 57-49 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - BA Rookie Tourney - 1-2 Punch League (x2) - Pandemonium Cypher - 1-2 Punch league Season 9 Rep Power: 24894578	Going to have to agree with Sharp on the structure and what not. Really like the build up and intensity as it went along. Thought the multis were spot on couldn't suggest any difference, wp solid. If I had to make a critisism, its that it was too short. Would of been nice to have kept building it, an then even gone back on it self and start going shorter lines again. I was just starting to really enjoy it when it ended. You had my attention and wasted it. But then I suppose the best things come in small packages. Anyways nice drop fam.