DONT THINK

something · 06-11-2015, 03:16 PM

Habitual deliberation. Deliberate. Definitive sense; I make it.
Constant contemplation. Is God some ancient pondered plot to save us.
Consider consideration. I censor my sentence by sensing taste. It's
compulsive. Repulsive. Repugnant. Impulsive. Indulgent. Reluctance
to reflect on one's reflection. Obsessed with what's incessant.
A second of second thought lasts forever if ever paused
to question each lesson taught like it's better than getting lost.
I'm mulling it over. I'm weighing my options.
Opportunity's losing steam under the weight of the process.
My behavior is honest, but nothing came from a promise;
the best of intentions crest at pretentious when initiation's a problem.
I catalog these matters. I imagine. Exhaustive.
When at a loss for hazards I enact and I cause them.
A caricature in characters. Words. Did I inherit a curse.
So much more to writing in a journal than what my parents observed.
A dissection of essence. Impressed with the narratives curves.
How I could manipulate the page and your merits, in turn.
Atheists playing God with a Satanist way of thought.
Not Satanist in a crazy sense, I mean the way in which we're Gods
of our own way and senses. Paint the picture's dawn
with rays emitting 'cross the day's ascending frost
and you'll wake to living calm. Paint the picture's dawn
with razor fitted jaws, serrated riddled claws
and a shade that sits too long? You may not wake today at all.
I'm trapped between the lines. Life's a dialog. A lie I write in songs.
I lie at night and talk to the rhymes and lines I've drawn.
They call themselves people, astounding, 'cause they don't know my easel
is see through and makes up their surroundings.

Mr. J · 06-11-2015, 03:26 PM

familiar faces behind a mask eh...

This was a nice piece, a good little return of sorts

Zen · 06-11-2015, 03:27 PM

This was pretty great.

Pharaohs Army · 06-12-2015, 04:47 PM

Top notch.. Lovin it.

Split Eight · 06-12-2015, 11:46 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by something

A caricature in characters. Words. Did I inherit a curse.
So much more to writing in a journal than what my parents observed.
A dissection of essence. Impressed with the narratives curves.
How I could manipulate the page and your merits, in turn.

Paint the picture's dawn
with razor fitted jaws, serrated riddled claws
and a shade that sits too long? You may not wake today at all.
I'm trapped between the lines. Life's a dialog. A lie I write in songs.
I lie at night and talk to the rhymes and lines I've drawn.
They call themselves people, astounding, 'cause they don't know my easel
is see through and makes up their surroundings.

unreal

if you're new here: stay

big baby · 06-13-2015, 02:35 PM

sucked thx

Pharaohs Army · 06-13-2015, 07:37 PM

Repped, BB.
Cuz I still literally laugh out loud at these. They don't get old and this one had 3 great set-ups for it.

Clutbuck · 06-14-2015, 05:59 AM

lmao it's obv Meta @dr. Dog

this was dope though:

A caricature in characters. Words. Did I inherit a curse.
So much more to writing in a journal than what my parents observed.

picked up again towards the end

good to see you writing again

Wise Wiggles · 06-14-2015, 10:24 AM

Welcome back. This was lovely!

dull boy · 06-14-2015, 11:03 AM

Fuck this nigga, man.

CopyPat · 06-14-2015, 12:10 PM

this was sick-nasty

@dull boy
post something

emcee squared · 05-03-2023, 08:53 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Clutbuck

lmao it's obv Meta @dr. Dog

this was dope though:

A caricature in characters. Words. Did I inherit a curse.
So much more to writing in a journal than what my parents observed.

picked up again towards the end

good to see you writing again

**** EDIITTT this is more likely ENG THAN DULL on another peak here [revise % guess]
@something
50% chance - Zen
10% chance - Dull AT BEST
and I DONT think it's BB either tho it MAY APPEAR. no this is not bb
Eng - 40% chance - REALLY MIGHT BE ENG YEP NOT ZEN?
BB - 0 %

06-11-2015, 03:16 PM	#1
something Junior Member Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 12 Champed - OM VOTM June 2015 Rep Power: 0	DONT THINK Habitual deliberation. Deliberate. Definitive sense; I make it. Constant contemplation. Is God some ancient pondered plot to save us. Consider consideration. I censor my sentence by sensing taste. It's compulsive. Repulsive. Repugnant. Impulsive. Indulgent. Reluctance to reflect on one's reflection. Obsessed with what's incessant. A second of second thought lasts forever if ever paused to question each lesson taught like it's better than getting lost. I'm mulling it over. I'm weighing my options. Opportunity's losing steam under the weight of the process. My behavior is honest, but nothing came from a promise; the best of intentions crest at pretentious when initiation's a problem. I catalog these matters. I imagine. Exhaustive. When at a loss for hazards I enact and I cause them. A caricature in characters. Words. Did I inherit a curse. So much more to writing in a journal than what my parents observed. A dissection of essence. Impressed with the narratives curves. How I could manipulate the page and your merits, in turn. Atheists playing God with a Satanist way of thought. Not Satanist in a crazy sense, I mean the way in which we're Gods of our own way and senses. Paint the picture's dawn with rays emitting 'cross the day's ascending frost and you'll wake to living calm. Paint the picture's dawn with razor fitted jaws, serrated riddled claws and a shade that sits too long? You may not wake today at all. I'm trapped between the lines. Life's a dialog. A lie I write in songs. I lie at night and talk to the rhymes and lines I've drawn. They call themselves people, astounding, 'cause they don't know my easel is see through and makes up their surroundings.

06-11-2015, 03:26 PM	#2
Mr. J The Clown Prince Join Date: Apr 2013 Posts: 5,028 Battle Record: 35-45 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 59349678	familiar faces behind a mask eh... This was a nice piece, a good little return of sorts __________________ .....laugh....and the world laughs with you

06-14-2015, 10:24 AM	#9
Wise Wiggles nok Su kow Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,507 Battle Record: 1-1 Rep Power: 51788019	Welcome back. This was lovely! __________________ "black as midnight..black as pitch blacker than the soul of the foulest witch"

06-14-2015, 12:10 PM	#11
CopyPat Mic Check Join Date: Mar 2013 Location: Calgary Alberta Canada Posts: 707 Battle Record: 13-10 Rep Power: 3742222	this was sick-nasty @dull boy post something __________________ My syllable count approximately a billion, bounce. You cannot compete.

06-11-2015, 03:27 PM	#3
Zen Arm the Homeless Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 4,104 Battle Record: 22-24 Champed - Art of Writing League Rep Power: 35079719	This was pretty great.

06-12-2015, 04:47 PM	#4
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Top notch.. Lovin it.

06-13-2015, 07:37 PM	#7
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,962 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Repped, BB. Cuz I still literally laugh out loud at these. They don't get old and this one had 3 great set-ups for it.

06-14-2015, 05:59 AM	#8
Clutbuck Battle Rap's Married Man Join Date: May 2015 Location: Crumpetville, England Posts: 389 Battle Record: 2-0 Champed - Gorilla Writing league Rep Power: 3513498	lmao it's obv Meta @dr. Dog this was dope though: A caricature in characters. Words. Did I inherit a curse. So much more to writing in a journal than what my parents observed. picked up again towards the end good to see you writing again

06-14-2015, 11:03 AM	#10
dull boy consults Lloyd Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 4,075 Battle Record: 0-8 Champed -1-2 Punch League Roast Rep Power: 39345601	Fuck this nigga, man.