WEEK 4: iSpaz 1-1 VS Blue Bayou 3-0 BLUE BAYOU WINS

UPN Zuch · 10-24-2020, 11:21 AM

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iSpaz · 10-24-2020, 05:58 PM

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iSpaz · 10-29-2020, 01:18 PM

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.
Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.
Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.
^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place.
She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid.
Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker.
..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures.

Blue Bayou · 10-29-2020, 09:08 PM

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life
i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you

UserName · 10-30-2020, 03:53 AM

spaz:

Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.

Really was your strongest bar to me, showcased the creativity and you dissed him. Your opener, it was cool from a rhyming standpoint, but its very statement-ish. you didnt actually hit him with anything. Twister was cool, not maybe fully quote-worthy, because I've seen a variation of it, but it was a solid jab. Mermaid line was kinda the weakest of the bunch, the multi to the rhyme was off and the concept in general fell a bit flat. Closer was ok, a step slightly above the opener. You've got some good pieces here, conceptually, nothing here was flat out bad... just have to put everything together a bit better next time.

blue:

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you

Opener was full of swag, faggot line was funny, closer was fire.

Well done gentlemen, this was a good read.

V - Blue

evaD · 10-30-2020, 06:56 AM

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.
Nice
Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.
Like this
Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.
Lmao this is fire
^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place.
She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid.
Not sure on this
Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker.
..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures.
Like what you did but the concept is really old. Nice verse though

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
Lol fuck u
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
Dope
you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life
Nice
i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you
Ok
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you
Lmao

Nice battle here ispaz impressed me and twister bar was hilarious to me. Unfortunately fell off slightly at the end. Blue was solid throughout and nicely worded.

Vote - blue

Orc · 10-30-2020, 08:32 AM

ISpaz was nice with it, I like his style and he’s dropping consistently well. Stand outs were the Easter egg and the Twister bar

Blue’s nonchalant swag-filled verse was very good. Pretty effortless. I liked everything except from the wallet keys etc line. Apple line was funny and so was the opener

I have Blue here

Culture · 10-30-2020, 09:06 AM

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.

this was a good opener

Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.

nah i wasnt feeling this one, the wording needs work

Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.

this is ight but ive seen nearly identical bars before

^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place.
She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid.

nah this was kinda corny

Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker.
..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures.

this is ok but not original

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me

not feeling it

i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot

this was funny

you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life

ok, wording's slick

i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you

eh i like the idea more than the bar

parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you

set-up could've been cleaner but this was cool

blue had more fresh concepts and his wording was far better. spaz started out decent with the opener but the rest didnt live up to the hype

v/ blue

Ajax · 10-30-2020, 11:56 AM

This was close. Ispaz worded his verse well. Concepts were pretty good, but not excellent. Just a fairly solid, well executed verse.

Blue’s first four were really well done. Simple, but lots of swagger. Then, IMO, he fell off a little bit. I think his last six were essentially a tie with Ispaz’s... but, his first four were enough to give him the nod.

Cool little battle. Blue wins.

Wanderer · 10-30-2020, 02:37 PM

Ispaz

Twister was cool

Blue

Votes cool
Apple cool
Take from you and parent company were solid enough

Blue takes this comfortably for me but I can see iSpaz being dope with some more creativity. Wording’s pretty much already there

Vote blue

TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO · 10-30-2020, 03:52 PM

Blue first four were fire. Rest was solid at worst.

Ispaz was really consistent but just didn’t have anything on the same level as Blue’s standouts.

Vote blue

Destroyer · 10-31-2020, 09:22 AM

Easter egg was good

Apple was hilarious lotb
Blue won without trying much

V/bb

dull boy · 10-31-2020, 11:25 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blue Bayou

i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot

Vote - Blue

thought Spaz was decent, for what it's worth.

Aero · 11-01-2020, 04:58 AM

Blue - vote more was cute, ispaz was oddly funny, giving ya doll pokes was lotb.

Ispaz- Easter egg cool, twister almost but too predictable

Blue won this good battle

Cred · 11-01-2020, 11:19 AM

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.
nah
Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray.
When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg.
nah bruh
Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.
lol aight
^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place.
She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid.
to simple, coul've been dope
Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker.
..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures
played fasho

vs

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
jokes
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
lol I fuck w/ it
you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life
nah
i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you
aight
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you
didn't like it

Decent lil battle here. I fuck with Blue's verse more here even tho I know he dropped lighttt. iSpaz jus came a bit to basic this time around for me.

V/ - Blue Bayou

Adverse · 11-01-2020, 12:41 PM

Ispaz has a concept of what battling is but he’s either returning after a long time or just starting off because he’s using old concepts like twister and mermaid stuff like that, I don’t think any of these bars hit too hard. Keep battling and trying to get personal, stuff like Easter egg had a good reference but I don’t think they quite connected all the way.

Blue came in like Deku with like a 10% Detroit Smash. Bars were cool but not up to your usual standard you seen an opportunity to take it easy this week. First two bars were really all that hit but was all you needed

Blue did his usual thing, Spazz keep studying

V/BB

Scout · 11-01-2020, 12:54 PM

Spaz

Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft.
I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off.
Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor.
You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister.

Decent verse man, i feel like more of your ideas could've hit with better wording

Blue

yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze
i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me
i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet
iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot
you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight
if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life
i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru
been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you
parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules..
parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you

Fire verse, everything hit..and that iSpaz/Apple shit was likely line of the week
Very impressive

Voting Blue Bayou

10-24-2020, 05:58 PM	#2
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161231	10? __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

10-29-2020, 01:18 PM	#3
iSpaz Gang shit on my brain Join Date: May 2015 Posts: 265 Battle Record: 10-11 Rep Power: 161231	Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft. I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off. Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray. When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg. Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor. You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister. ^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place. She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid. Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker. ..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures. __________________ But don't say I can't rap like I'm not a Rap God, Like I won't break your fucking favorite rapper's rap jaw

10-29-2020, 09:08 PM	#4
Blue Bayou Ukrainian Howlitzers Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 5,091 Battle Record: 41-24 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 3 - Alias Tournament II - Fight Night XLVIII - Fight Night XXV - Fight Night XV - Fight Night (3x) - Netcees Battle League (4x) - NBL Tag Team Season 3 - Lyric Olympics - 1-2 Punch League (3x) - Battle Arena League (2x) - Key Grand Prix 2018 1/2 - BA Tag - NPL Roast - Netcees Pic League Rep Power: 17502332	yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules.. parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you Last edited by Blue Bayou; 10-29-2020 at 10:50 PM.

10-30-2020, 03:53 AM	#5
UserName K I N G Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 685 Battle Record: 15-10 Rep Power: 3228862	spaz: Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray. When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg. Really was your strongest bar to me, showcased the creativity and you dissed him. Your opener, it was cool from a rhyming standpoint, but its very statement-ish. you didnt actually hit him with anything. Twister was cool, not maybe fully quote-worthy, because I've seen a variation of it, but it was a solid jab. Mermaid line was kinda the weakest of the bunch, the multi to the rhyme was off and the concept in general fell a bit flat. Closer was ok, a step slightly above the opener. You've got some good pieces here, conceptually, nothing here was flat out bad... just have to put everything together a bit better next time. blue: yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules.. parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you Opener was full of swag, faggot line was funny, closer was fire. Well done gentlemen, this was a good read. V - Blue __________________ First Class

10-30-2020, 06:56 AM	#6
evaD Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 697 Battle Record: 19-10 Champed - BA Show And Prove - Summer Classic XI Rep Power: 4156644	Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft. I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off. Nice Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray. When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg. Like this Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor. You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister. Lmao this is fire ^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place. She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid. Not sure on this Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker. ..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures. Like what you did but the concept is really old. Nice verse though yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me Lol fuck u i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot Dope you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life Nice i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you Ok parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules.. parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you Lmao Nice battle here ispaz impressed me and twister bar was hilarious to me. Unfortunately fell off slightly at the end. Blue was solid throughout and nicely worded. Vote - blue __________________

10-30-2020, 08:32 AM	#7
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	ISpaz was nice with it, I like his style and he’s dropping consistently well. Stand outs were the Easter egg and the Twister bar Blue’s nonchalant swag-filled verse was very good. Pretty effortless. I liked everything except from the wallet keys etc line. Apple line was funny and so was the opener I have Blue here

10-30-2020, 09:06 AM	#8
Culture Beast Join Date: Jun 2020 Posts: 36 Battle Record: 3-0 Rep Power: 375064	Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft. I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off. this was a good opener Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray. When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg. nah i wasnt feeling this one, the wording needs work Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor. You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister. this is ight but ive seen nearly identical bars before ^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place. She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid. nah this was kinda corny Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker. ..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures. this is ok but not original yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me not feeling it i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot this was funny you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life ok, wording's slick i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you eh i like the idea more than the bar parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules.. parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you set-up could've been cleaner but this was cool blue had more fresh concepts and his wording was far better. spaz started out decent with the opener but the rest didnt live up to the hype v/ blue

10-30-2020, 11:56 AM	#9
Ajax Senior Member Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 344 Battle Record: 5-4 Rep Power: 95147	This was close. Ispaz worded his verse well. Concepts were pretty good, but not excellent. Just a fairly solid, well executed verse. Blue’s first four were really well done. Simple, but lots of swagger. Then, IMO, he fell off a little bit. I think his last six were essentially a tie with Ispaz’s... but, his first four were enough to give him the nod. Cool little battle. Blue wins. __________________ https://soundcloud.com/ajaxinstrumentals

10-30-2020, 02:37 PM	#10
Wanderer Senior Member Join Date: Apr 2015 Location: England Posts: 587 Battle Record: 24-33 Champed - NPL Roast Rep Power: 7457538	Ispaz Twister was cool Blue Votes cool Apple cool Take from you and parent company were solid enough Blue takes this comfortably for me but I can see iSpaz being dope with some more creativity. Wording’s pretty much already there Vote blue

10-30-2020, 03:52 PM	#11
TOP iLL DRAGSTER TWO I <3 girls an good at sex Join Date: May 2020 Posts: 149 Battle Record: 4-4 Rep Power: 132751	Blue first four were fire. Rest was solid at worst. Ispaz was really consistent but just didn’t have anything on the same level as Blue’s standouts. Vote blue __________________ They think I’m dope and I Cedar Point

11-01-2020, 04:58 AM	#14
Aero GOAT Join Date: Jul 2015 Posts: 4,826 Battle Record: 14-17 Champed - Site Diss Competition - Tag Tournament III - Lyric Olympics - Tag Tournament: "Omicron Variant" Rep Power: 0	Blue - vote more was cute, ispaz was oddly funny, giving ya doll pokes was lotb. Ispaz- Easter egg cool, twister almost but too predictable Blue won this good battle __________________ Too Rich IRL to Be Here. I'm Out.

11-01-2020, 11:19 AM	#15
Cred The Biggest Join Date: Jan 2015 Posts: 3,254 Battle Record: 67-32 Accomplishments - Gun Bar King Champed - Fight Night 3 - Fight Night 10 - Fight Night 12 - Battle Arena League Rep Power: 85899380	Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft. I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off. nah Nothin to say. It's a shallow grave the way I let that heater spray. When I put Blue in the dirt for everyone to find.. that's just an easter egg. nah bruh Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor. You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister. lol aight ^^ While you doin that. I'm with your girl and it's over at your place. She was wet before we got down... calling that bitch a mermaid. to simple, coul've been dope Headin off. You look lost and you should leave Earth quicker. ..So when I make that Canon flash and light you up.. that ain't me takin pictures played fasho vs yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me jokes i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot lol I fuck w/ it you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life nah i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you aight parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules.. parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you didn't like it Decent lil battle here. I fuck with Blue's verse more here even tho I know he dropped lighttt. iSpaz jus came a bit to basic this time around for me. V/ - Blue Bayou

11-01-2020, 12:41 PM	#16
Adverse low tide in serotonin bay Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 2,744 Battle Record: 37-28 Champed - GWL Picture Challenge - Guerrilla Writing League - Black August II Rep Power: 15446143	Ispaz has a concept of what battling is but he’s either returning after a long time or just starting off because he’s using old concepts like twister and mermaid stuff like that, I don’t think any of these bars hit too hard. Keep battling and trying to get personal, stuff like Easter egg had a good reference but I don’t think they quite connected all the way. Blue came in like Deku with like a 10% Detroit Smash. Bars were cool but not up to your usual standard you seen an opportunity to take it easy this week. First two bars were really all that hit but was all you needed Blue did his usual thing, Spazz keep studying V/BB

11-01-2020, 12:54 PM	#17
Scout Jeice! Who's that? Join Date: Oct 2020 Posts: 293 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 1230369	Spaz Long time. Yeah it's been a minute but I know you punch soft. I'm firing the stainless at your dome.. no need to shake the rust off. Big Blue. This dude can spit too and most the time you the victor. You got bodies on top of bodies.. when you w/ your boys for a game of Twister. Decent verse man, i feel like more of your ideas could've hit with better wording Blue yawnnnn, i don’t fuck with your sort of steeze i’m only here cuz User, Hush & Dave vote a little more than me i attract pussy, no way this fella’s a magnet iSpaz? looks like Apple finally developed a faggot you'll never school me when it comes to rap & what’s tight if i take anything from you it’ll be your keys, wallet, jacket and life i stay beating your girls pussy up, it’s hell she’s been thru been giving ya doll so many pokes ppl think i cast a spell against you parent company to me is head office that assigns the rules.. parent company to you is your only 2 friends spending time with you Fire verse, everything hit..and that iSpaz/Apple shit was likely line of the week Very impressive Voting Blue Bayou