Same as Before...

Rawn MD · 03-23-2014, 03:33 PM

SnF

Find me a middle man...
I got young gunners who'd kill for a little bread to get ahead
A crooked ass criminal at his pinnacle, with past acquittals in the feds
Keep my eyes low, behind those rose prada nickel plated lens
and tread with more a low profile than the tires hulled in the v8 benz
My minds so Capone, or Geryon with a list of sick demands
with twice the Gaul n no flaws than diamonds ship direct from France
drinkin raw, single malt that burns with the strength of ants
study'n law by the clause, I'd take that charge just to catch a glance
A strategist, protagonist, that plans the best when damned
Hyperactive pistol grip, bullets Ritalin regrets through blood n sand
My head is, invested in measurements, sums, cuts and grams
Defense system, munitions, guns, business, drugs, trusts and grants
Saki sippin, double dippin', embezzlements just another scam
they watch mine, I watch the time on my rolex bezel colored crayon
Slangin raw, China paw and angel dust in stables from Japan
strong-armin the game with fatal gloved hands in case the gun jams

Rawn MD · 03-23-2014, 03:44 PM

http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=141
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=60290
@Chyeahhh Guevara @Nigma

Chyeahhh!!! · 03-24-2014, 03:25 PM

Shit was proper like. The rust shows though as im sure mine would as well. Im gonna drop something this week

Rawn MD · 03-26-2014, 07:20 PM

climb

Fig · 03-27-2014, 11:15 PM

This was pretty nice. Personally, considering its a snf piece, I would liked to have seen closer attention to them syllables. I need flow nigga. This read kinda clunky to me.

BUT

You're strength really lies in the swagged out imagery. Those last two lines were especially nice. Keep doin you

Rawn MD · 03-31-2014, 06:02 PM

thnx 4 the feed fig

Geno · 03-31-2014, 09:40 PM

This was dope my G

Exis · 04-08-2014, 02:49 AM

Cool stuff...flow was a little anal at times but you know, do you.Imagery was nice in places...thought the second half was stronger than the first.

Enjoyed it, stay upwards.

King Ra. · 04-08-2014, 07:30 AM

Rawn MacGod. Sup homie? This started off slow, I believe the first two lines and I had thought that you either just chopped some shit up together or you're shaking off the rust. But then things really started picking up. Flow was pretty decent, but it was more of your content and imagery that shined here, which is your strong suit. So all in all, this definitely was a good lil swag flex. We should collab again soon.

Good stuff.

03-23-2014, 03:33 PM	#1
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	Same as Before... SnF Find me a middle man... I got young gunners who'd kill for a little bread to get ahead A crooked ass criminal at his pinnacle, with past acquittals in the feds Keep my eyes low, behind those rose prada nickel plated lens and tread with more a low profile than the tires hulled in the v8 benz My minds so Capone, or Geryon with a list of sick demands with twice the Gaul n no flaws than diamonds ship direct from France drinkin raw, single malt that burns with the strength of ants study'n law by the clause, I'd take that charge just to catch a glance A strategist, protagonist, that plans the best when damned Hyperactive pistol grip, bullets Ritalin regrets through blood n sand My head is, invested in measurements, sums, cuts and grams Defense system, munitions, guns, business, drugs, trusts and grants Saki sippin, double dippin', embezzlements just another scam they watch mine, I watch the time on my rolex bezel colored crayon Slangin raw, China paw and angel dust in stables from Japan strong-armin the game with fatal gloved hands in case the gun jams __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

03-23-2014, 03:44 PM	#2
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=141 http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=60290 @Chyeahhh Guevara @Nigma __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est Last edited by Rawn MD; 03-25-2014 at 07:16 PM.

03-24-2014, 03:25 PM	#3
Chyeahhh!!! Saul Paul Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: remote location with a remote weapon station Posts: 6,397 Battle Record: 16-26 Rep Power: 1663348	Shit was proper like. The rust shows though as im sure mine would as well. Im gonna drop something this week __________________ KNOW YOUR MAKER BEFORE YOU'RE MADE TO I know the ledge, his sister's a jumpoff

03-26-2014, 07:20 PM	#4
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	climb __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

03-27-2014, 11:15 PM	#5
Fig Om Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 6,473 Battle Record: 8-16 Rep Power: 84181559	This was pretty nice. Personally, considering its a snf piece, I would liked to have seen closer attention to them syllables. I need flow nigga. This read kinda clunky to me. BUT You're strength really lies in the swagged out imagery. Those last two lines were especially nice. Keep doin you __________________ BIRDHORSE 8-15

03-31-2014, 06:02 PM	#6
Rawn MD Get MacDon Join Date: Dec 1969 Posts: 2,168 Battle Record: 3-7 Accomplishments - OM HOF Rep Power: 0	thnx 4 the feed fig __________________ FFC>FCC A. bove T. he R. est

03-31-2014, 09:40 PM	#7
Geno White Earl Join Date: Jan 2013 Location: Philly Cat. Posts: 12,330 Battle Record: 10-15 Accomplishments - Open Mic HOF (4x) Champed - Netcees Writers League - Write Week I - Write Week 8 Rep Power: 50036758	This was dope my G __________________ *-A.bove T.he R.est*

04-08-2014, 02:49 AM	#8
Exis ............ Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 3,938 Battle Record: 3-3 Rep Power: 0	Cool stuff...flow was a little anal at times but you know, do you.Imagery was nice in places...thought the second half was stronger than the first. Enjoyed it, stay upwards.

04-08-2014, 07:30 AM	#9
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Rawn MacGod. Sup homie? This started off slow, I believe the first two lines and I had thought that you either just chopped some shit up together or you're shaking off the rust. But then things really started picking up. Flow was pretty decent, but it was more of your content and imagery that shined here, which is your strong suit. So all in all, this definitely was a good lil swag flex. We should collab again soon. Good stuff. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.