Utmost vs. Pryde - {Utmost wins}

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@Utmost @Pryde

@Utmost @Pryde

[Utmost]

ext

[Greed]

If you was pryde, you'd be shippin that work out by the pound
If ut i, then bitches would be uncomfortable when I'm around
Look, y your last girl a ho is your fault, no d game present and your spits is depressin
He told her 'bitch I'm going IN'..... she like 'I think you need an extension'
See me I put her back out. Leave that bitch with a bent disk
Nobody speakin about utmost. I don't even know how to use utmost in a sentence
As far as your approach your a tense bitch. Dragging on lines like you got swag
Nigga ill beat your ass, feet torso legs neck face arms and hands
Picture this wack bitch leading a team ever at all
This faggot ain't quarterbackin, he taking snaps with no ball
Who really taught you how to write. Point em out I need to break his pen
Your fuckin set ups be so bitch I think queen latifahs robbing banks again
Your awkward cause your awkward, this is not just a phase
Only time you givin women pleasure is when you walkin away
Normally I have good closers, ask around niggas heard of me
Utmost a good closer too, on the night shift at buger king

[Utmost]

just got home, i'll hit this up in a bit

[Utmost]

whaddup


Pull bitches??? this head is insane, usin a checkbook instead of ya game
coz anytime Pricy Hoes.....there on the corner n they STILL hike up their regular rate
^^^dont be mad its true, uve been brown nosing with hella practice dude
& after the sex, they all tell you to Skat... but wouldnt you know..he's into THAT too
drop anotha horrid flip n' i'll right cross you, fuckin pissed no ones addressin this hack
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX... i dont know how else to 'xpress it' than THAT
I mean, the nerve of you! it'd be a stretch to even call ya text aight
since you've been droppin enuff 'Retro Garb lines'... to suit Nika for the rest of his life
Imma lecture this tyke, chin check you twice then leave you on the floor
I strike like lightning... & ur catchin a dual shock to ya system that'd win Sony the console war
Betta find help!!! well, either way this butt pirate's goin overboard..tryna front
Coz my nine'll have ur gang, plank...& I guarantee ya crew'll be layin stiff when im done
Predictions were a farce.. ur in a tier of wackness that Rican escaped
so if ur sitting pretty here Pryde.. dimes are faning me and feedin me grapes
Im ashamed to be even battlin you.. its lights out when i strike this fag
with a 1 punch thats sendin you night night... leavin you more PM'd than the site collab
.
.
pz

[Atomic]

If you was pryde, you'd be shippin that work out by the pound
If ut i, then bitches would be uncomfortable when I'm around
wording murdered it, okay concept.
Look, y your last girl a ho is your fault, no d game present and your spits is depressin
He told her 'bitch I'm going IN'..... she like 'I think you need an extension'
heh, doesn't hit hard but it's funny
See me I put her back out. Leave that bitch with a bent disk
Nobody speakin about utmost. I don't even know how to use utmost in a sentence
lol? no
As far as your approach your a tense bitch. Dragging on lines like you got swag
Nigga ill beat your ass, feet torso legs neck face arms and hands
meh
Picture this wack bitch leading a team ever at all
This faggot ain't quarterbackin, he taking snaps with no ball
no
Who really taught you how to write. Point em out I need to break his pen
Your fuckin set ups be so bitch I think queen latifahs robbing banks again
lmaoooooooo, pretty cool imo
Your awkward cause your awkward, this is not just a phase
Only time you givin women pleasure is when you walkin away
meh, way too simple, doesn't hit @ all
Normally I have good closers, ask around niggas heard of me
Utmost a good closer too, on the night shift at buger king
not bad.

//

Pull bitches??? this head is insane, usin a checkbook instead of ya game
coz anytime Pricy Hoes.....there on the corner n they STILL hike up their regular rate
dope
^^^dont be mad its true, uve been brown nosing with hella practice dude
& after the sex, they all tell you to Skat... but wouldnt you know..he's into THAT too
heh, it's alright
drop anotha horrid flip n' i'll right cross you, fuckin pissed no ones addressin this hack
XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX... i dont know how else to 'xpress it' than THAT
dunno why but this is dope to me.
I mean, the nerve of you! it'd be a stretch to even call ya text aight
since you've been droppin enuff 'Retro Garb lines'... to suit Nika for the rest of his life
don't get it.
Imma lecture this tyke, chin check you twice then leave you on the floor
I strike like lightning... & ur catchin a dual shock to ya system that'd win Sony the
console war
cool.
Betta find help!!! well, either way this butt pirate's goin overboard..tryna front
Coz my nine'll have ur gang, plank...& I guarantee ya crew'll be layin stiff when im done
nah
Predictions were a farce.. ur in a tier of wackness that Rican escaped
so if ur sitting pretty here Pryde.. dimes are faning me and feedin me grapes
mehhh, nah
Im ashamed to be even battlin you.. its lights out when i strike this fag
with a 1 punch thats sendin you night night... leavin you more PM'd than the site collab
punch is weak concept is ok.

both had good concepts, i feel that utmost had the better concepts overall. he had lotb w/ either pricy or xpress, either one was dope. pryde had a few haymakers aswell but it wasn't enough imo

v/ utmost

[Sharp]

Queen latifah

V

Pricy, system shock


A lot of dated ideas and wording here. Pretty sure utmost keyed but he still had two solid bars that took this one imo

V/utmost

[Dominate]

Uti, going in, utmost in a sentence and Burger King were cool to me

Vs

Pricey, scat, xpress and sitting pretty


Not as even as the quotes though - I thought utmost was a bit more creative and clever with the concepts, and generally worded his lines a little better


V/ utmost

Pride - ur stuff read real clean n flowed nice.. But a lot of ur punches came off kinda statementish or simple.. Try to up ur wit man... But line wise I got u with bitch set ups and I'll give u Utmost in a sentence cu it was funny. Ur closer almost hit with a lol factor, but closer concept is played to me. And the uti line woulda been more effective if executed w better wording, rather than coming across like a statement.

Utmost - similar problems with ur wording to me, almost feels to verbose at times imo.. But line wise I got sitting pretty n scat.. With near hits on plank (I liked the concept extention, but it was worded poorly), nik-A retro and pricey hoes, but some problem w wording. Ur closer was actually worded well but played, and I wasn't feeling x press or dual shock at all.

Utmost had the better concepts as well as execution. So..

V/utmost

[Lecture]

Cool flow through the verse for Pryde, however didn't really feel anything connected hard enough to shake over Utmosts scat & sitting lines. Was a coo read tho from both.

v: utmosts.