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Old 02-26-2014, 02:15 PM   #1
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wrote this like 3 weeks back and just thought Id post it up

Trynna Relax A little venting is all I need
im trying to erase the thoughts that are creeping inside of me
haunting my dreams, I haven't slept in weeks
losing so much weight because its hard for me to eat
blunts don't build my appetite, nor do they help me sleep
im laying on my back at night just wondering where ill be
when all is said and done will you be lying next to me?
I told you I was leaving had you crying on ya knees
begging and begging please baby please don't leave
im sorry for what ive done you have to believe me
I wasn't trynna hear left you in my own house
took a shower got dressed and broke out went to get smoked out
told you to pack ya shit everylast thing get the fuck outtz my crib dirty bitch
felt heart broken, felt like my heart was stolen
felt like we were falling apart slowly , I feel stuck
how could this nigga destroy something we took so long to build up
what the fuck girl , you acting up
take that shit to Hollywood them niggas like that stuff
enough is enough but I cant believe you did this
I saw so much potential in this, now its finished
what a fucking ending , 3 years down the drain
now im fucking here venting, you don't feel my pain
girl you don't feel my stressing I thought you was the one gods angel of perfection
you proved me wrong I had a misconception
of what you had to offer girl you changed my whole perspective
I see you different the one I love is missing
until you go and find her we walk In different directions
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Old 02-26-2014, 05:01 PM   #2
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The Hollywood line made me lol
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Old 02-26-2014, 07:40 PM   #4
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Damn yall r harsh haha
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