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Old 06-15-2016, 04:52 PM   #1
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Old 06-15-2016, 05:50 PM   #2
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Old 06-20-2016, 10:53 PM   #3
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I'm dumping loads on your chicks face...I knew she messed w/ dick, but DANG...
I'm giving that bitch ropes around her head...while you gotta BEG her just to hang
Reach and that glock's down your throat...Leavin' clips buried in this clowns mind
Before you shoot...I'll have the piece hanging out your mouth like Steph Curry at the foul line
Gun butt this faggot. That shit gonna knock him unconscious
That Calabasas head in so bad it'll make Diddy drop a response diss
I fuck your chick and never call her....you give her part of your heart
For me? She just girl without a name who gets poked in the belly....she Arya Stark
I'll leave your body parts EVERYWHERE, blood splattered....shit will be gruesome, fucko
When the cops seal the scene...
they'll have to push that tape wayyyy back like it was produced by uh-oh
Last thing you gonna hear is bones breaking...This fucker gonna be crushed
It's gonna be one snap following another...but none of them gonna be Hush
Your woman's a meth hoe who lets ya boys hit...She gonna get deflowered
That bitch getting banged on the glass by the block worse than LeBron on Iguodala
That ox'll slice but you'll get the pocketknife...Turn your face to fusilli, fam
Once I flip the switch that blade'll go over your head REAL fast...that's a ceiling fan
You WHACK...I'm surprised you weren't ranked 16/16. Believe it, my dude
You're like the Crying Jordan Face...we'd only put you over people who lose

18.

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Old 06-21-2016, 02:08 AM   #5
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Whatever fool, LOOK..

Don’t believe this fraud’s fables, fake personals played out,
he should write on a massage table - can only feel that shit if it’s laid out.
Call our last match humbling, SIKE fuck yo wack publishing
wet me up, but I’m back bubbling. As in Gremlins bitch, my attacks doubling.
Better have Aero check assigned to me or die in the street,
blade aligned & sleek, to cut a percentage out of Cash, take a finder’s fee.
Fight one-on-one he not, can’t even protect his honeypot..
watch how I’ll mush dude aside & bust on his bitch face, that’s a money shot.
Yo girl’s slut level is so awesome, contracts STDs so often
should live at CDC’s home office, she sitting on more FIRE than Joe Boston.
S’best not showing up to gamble w/ ya life, I’m going nuts
s’why the Colt .44 long asf, cuz the best way to put Cash down’s to pony up.
Liiiines u keep stressing in ya joint’s desperate & annoying,
yo whole game is fake fam, it’s Space Jam the way u stretching for the point.
Lancaster faggot’ll need ye olde plow to get outta this hole
tbhonest & bold, I’da yanked the strap if this Amish Buggy got outta control.

..BODY.
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Old 06-23-2016, 07:35 AM   #6
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each and that glock's down your throat...Leavin' clips buried in this clowns mind
Before you shoot...I'll have the piece hanging out your mouth like Steph Curry at the foul line
I'll leave your body parts EVERYWHERE, blood splattered....shit will be gruesome, fucko
When the cops seal the scene...
they'll have to push that tape wayyyy back like it was produced by uh-oh
Last thing you gonna hear is bones breaking...This fucker gonna be crushed
It's gonna be one snap following another...but none of them gonna be Hush

That bitch getting banged on the glass by the block worse than LeBron on Iguodala
That ox'll slice but you'll get the pocketknife...Turn your face to fusilli, fam
Once I flip the switch that blade'll go over your head REAL fast...that's a ceiling fan

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Don’t believe this fraud’s fables, fake personals played out,
he should write on a massage table - can only feel that shit if it’s laid out.
Call our last match humbling, SIKE fuck yo wack publishing
wet me up, but I’m back bubbling. As in Gremlins bitch, my attacks doubling.

Better have Aero check assigned to me or die in the street,
blade aligned & sleek, to cut a percentage out of Cash, take a finder’s fee.

Dope battles. Rep to both. Cash had a lot of shit I was fuckin with. Curry joint was fire, bang on the glass was nice & that Hush line was flames. Shad came out the gates swinging, I was thinkin to myself 'damn' but then started to lose steam which imo was due to lack of staying aggressive like he very was last week.

VOTE - @Cashius
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Old 06-23-2016, 10:41 AM   #7
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Cool battle just read it. No time to vote, be back later.
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Old 06-23-2016, 03:59 PM   #8
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Reach and that glock's down your throat...Leavin' clips buried in this clowns mind
Before you shoot...I'll have the piece hanging out your mouth like Steph Curry at the foul line
I'll leave your body parts EVERYWHERE, blood splattered....shit will be gruesome, fucko
When the cops seal the scene...
they'll have to push that tape wayyyy back like it was produced by uh-oh
Last thing you gonna hear is bones breaking...This fucker gonna be crushed
It's gonna be one snap following another...but none of them gonna be Hush
Your woman's a meth hoe who lets ya boys hit...She gonna get deflowered
That bitch getting banged on the glass by the block worse than LeBron on Iguodala

Vs

Call our last match humbling, SIKE fuck yo wack publishing
wet me up, but I’m back bubbling. As in Gremlins bitch, my attacks doubling.
S’best not showing up to gamble w/ ya life, I’m going nuts
s’why the Colt .44 long asf, cuz the best way to put Cash down’s to pony up.
Liiiines u keep stressing in ya joint’s desperate & annoying,
yo whole game is fake fam, it’s Space Jam the way u stretching for the point.


This shit was close af. Dope battle both of yall. Overall i felt like cash hit harder and was direct and mean with his approach. Schad had some really clever shit but the wording kinda softened the blow. I just dont think he came as harsh as cash. Both were consistent but cash out muscled him.
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Old 06-23-2016, 09:10 PM   #9
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Steph curry, arya stark, uh-oh tape, snap hush and celing fan

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Opener, gremlins (lotb), joe boston (lol) and space jam

This battle was dope as fuck. I got cash w/one more quote and shad with lotb with that gremlins shit. That was fire.
Overall though, i think cash landed more overall and was just harsher enough to take it

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I'm dumping loads on your chicks face...I knew she messed w/ dick, but DANG...
I'm giving that bitch ropes around her head...while you gotta BEG her just to hang
Cool opener
Reach and that glock's down your throat...Leavin' clips buried in this clowns mind
Before you shoot...I'll have the piece hanging out your mouth like Steph Curry at the foul line
Fire
Gun butt this faggot. That shit gonna knock him unconscious
That Calabasas head in so bad it'll make Diddy drop a response diss
Not feeling this
I fuck your chick and never call her....you give her part of your heart
For me? She just girl without a name who gets poked in the belly....she Arya Stark
Alright
I'll leave your body parts EVERYWHERE, blood splattered....shit will be gruesome, fucko
When the cops seal the scene...
they'll have to push that tape wayyyy back like it was produced by uh-oh
Lmao
Last thing you gonna hear is bones breaking...This fucker gonna be crushed
It's gonna be one snap following another...but none of them gonna be Hush
Nice
Your woman's a meth hoe who lets ya boys hit...She gonna get deflowered
That bitch getting banged on the glass by the block worse than LeBron on Iguodala
Fire again
That ox'll slice but you'll get the pocketknife...Turn your face to fusilli, fam
Once I flip the switch that blade'll go over your head REAL fast...that's a ceiling fan
Nice
You WHACK...I'm surprised you weren't ranked 16/16. Believe it, my dude
You're like the Crying Jordan Face...we'd only put you over people who lose
Not feeling this

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Don’t believe this fraud’s fables, fake personals played out,
he should write on a massage table - can only feel that shit if it’s laid out.
Alright
Call our last match humbling, SIKE fuck yo wack publishing
wet me up, but I’m back bubbling. As in Gremlins bitch, my attacks doubling.
Cool
Better have Aero check assigned to me or die in the street,
blade aligned & sleek, to cut a percentage out of Cash, take a finder’s fee.
Cool again
Fight one-on-one he not, can’t even protect his honeypot..
watch how I’ll mush dude aside & bust on his bitch face, that’s a money shot.
Not feeling this
Yo girl’s slut level is so awesome, contracts STDs so often
should live at CDC’s home office, she sitting on more FIRE than Joe Boston.
Lmao
S’best not showing up to gamble w/ ya life, I’m going nuts
s’why the Colt .44 long asf, cuz the best way to put Cash down’s to pony up.
not feeling this
Liiiines u keep stressing in ya joint’s desperate & annoying,
yo whole game is fake fam, it’s Space Jam the way u stretching for the point.
Nice
Lancaster faggot’ll need ye olde plow to get outta this hole
tbhonest & bold, I’da yanked the strap if this Amish Buggy got outta control.
Not feeling this

Thought cash had the two best lines of the battle with some above average lines following, shad had a lot of nice lines but nothing that stood out. MVGT cash
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I'm dumping loads on your chicks face...I knew she messed w/ dick, but DANG...
I'm giving that bitch ropes around her head...while you gotta BEG her just to hang

Lmao this is nice

Reach and that glock's down your throat...Leavin' clips buried in this clowns mind
Before you shoot...I'll have the piece hanging out your mouth like Steph Curry at the foul line

Ok

Gun butt this faggot. That shit gonna knock him unconscious
That Calabasas head in so bad it'll make Diddy drop a response diss

Dope

I fuck your chick and never call her....you give her part of your heart
For me? She just girl without a name who gets poked in the belly....she Arya Stark

Idk the reference

I'll leave your body parts EVERYWHERE, blood splattered....shit will be gruesome, fucko
When the cops seal the scene...
they'll have to push that tape wayyyy back like it was produced by uh-oh

Extra wordy...yikes. still kindve dug it tho.

Last thing you gonna hear is bones breaking...This fucker gonna be crushed
It's gonna be one snap following another...but none of them gonna be Hush

Ok ok

Your woman's a meth hoe who lets ya boys hit...She gonna get deflowered
That bitch getting banged on the glass by the block worse than LeBron on Iguodala

Lol this is fireeeeeee

That ox'll slice but you'll get the pocketknife...Turn your face to fusilli, fam
Once I flip the switch that blade'll go over your head REAL fast...that's a ceiling fan

Like this...also fusilli...haha swag

You WHACK...I'm surprised you weren't ranked 16/16. Believe it, my dude
You're like the Crying Jordan Face...we'd only put you over people who lose

Ok

18.



Whatever fool, LOOK..

Don’t believe this fraud’s fables, fake personals played out,
he should write on a massage table - can only feel that shit if it’s laid out.

This is off to me

Call our last match humbling, SIKE fuck yo wack publishing
wet me up, but I’m back bubbling. As in Gremlins bitch, my attacks doubling.

Yall both got a little swaggy in this one aintya? Haha ok ok

Better have Aero check assigned to me or die in the street,
blade aligned & sleek, to cut a percentage out of Cash, take a finder’s fee.

Lmfao at the set up. Punch was worded good. Played.

Fight one-on-one he not, can’t even protect his honeypot..
watch how I’ll mush dude aside & bust on his bitch face, that’s a money shot.

Eh

Yo girl’s slut level is so awesome, contracts STDs so often
should live at CDC’s home office, she sitting on more FIRE than Joe Boston.

LMFAO

S’best not showing up to gamble w/ ya life, I’m going nuts
s’why the Colt .44 long asf, cuz the best way to put Cash down’s to pony up.

Alot going on in this one. I dig this overly creative jawns.....hard to make them sting tho

Liiiines u keep stressing in ya joint’s desperate & annoying,
yo whole game is fake fam, it’s Space Jam the way u stretching for the point.

WOOOOOO fuck yes

Lancaster faggot’ll need ye olde plow to get outta this hole
tbhonest & bold, I’da yanked the strap if this Amish Buggy got outta control.

Lol pa personals boooyah

..BODY.[/QUOTE]


I like cash in this one better for real. Thought schad had a couple bangers but had sum muddled shjt that was hard for me to dig thru at sum.parts which slowed the momentum kf the punches and the verse for me. Cash had sum cool jawns...his wording is mean....overly done at times but he's saying alot and with style. I got him here handily.

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I'm dumping loads on your chicks face...I knew she messed w/ dick, but DANG...
I'm giving that bitch ropes around her head...while you gotta BEG her just to hang
cool
Reach and that glock's down your throat...Leavin' clips buried in this clowns mind
Before you shoot...I'll have the piece hanging out your mouth like Steph Curry at the foul line
this is G shit
I fuck your chick and never call her....you give her part of your heart
For me? She just girl without a name who gets poked in the belly....she Arya Stark
haha nice
Your woman's a meth hoe who lets ya boys hit...She gonna get deflowered
That bitch getting banged on the glass by the block worse than LeBron on Iguodala

damn... one of the best bars of playoffs so far to me
That ox'll slice but you'll get the pocketknife...Turn your face to fusilli, fam
Once I flip the switch that blade'll go over your head REAL fast...that's a ceiling fan
concept wasn't nothin crazy but wording from set up to punchline carried it good

vs.

Better have Aero check assigned to me or die in the street,
blade aligned & sleek, to cut a percentage out of Cash, take a finder’s fee.
tough
Yo girl’s slut level is so awesome, contracts STDs so often
should live at CDC’s home office, she sitting on more FIRE than Joe Boston.
lol
S’best not showing up to gamble w/ ya life, I’m going nuts
s’why the Colt .44 long asf, cuz the best way to put Cash down’s to pony up.

whew this is fiiire
Liiiines u keep stressing in ya joint’s desperate & annoying,
yo whole game is fake fam, it’s Space Jam the way u stretching for the point.
heavy hit too

dope battle... both brought the haymakers
There was a couple a little off to me from Schad but those 4 were all money
He did a couple cash nameplays that were better than any I seen recently, creative shit
on the other side the homie Cashius had a high level verse too
a little more consistency to me and the Lebron block joint popped. heat.
Schad's pony up joint was up there too but overall his verse wasn't on the level of $

V/ Cash

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Gave it to cash, iguodala line was lotb, more consistent

Schade had some fire and then some that were off, but not too bad..

I liked the finders fee an pony up

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Cashius:
I'm dumping loads on your chicks face...I knew she messed w/ dick, but DANG...
I'm giving that bitch ropes around her head...while you gotta BEG her just to hang

I fuck your chick and never call her....you give her part of your heart
For me? She just girl without a name who gets poked in the belly....she Arya Stark

Last thing you gonna hear is bones breaking...This fucker gonna be crushed
It's gonna be one snap following another...but none of them gonna be Hush

That ox'll slice but you'll get the pocketknife...Turn your face to fusilli, fam
Once I flip the switch that blade'll go over your head REAL fast...that's a ceiling fan


Schadenfreude:


Better have Aero check assigned to me or die in the street,
blade aligned & sleek, to cut a percentage out of Cash, take a finder’s fee.

Yo girl’s slut level is so awesome, contracts STDs so often
should live at CDC’s home office, she sitting on more FIRE than Joe Boston.
S’best not showing up to gamble w/ ya life, I’m going nuts
s’why the Colt .44 long asf, cuz the best way to put Cash down’s to pony up.
Liiiines u keep stressing in ya joint’s desperate & annoying,
yo whole game is fake fam, it’s Space Jam the way u stretching for the point.
Lancaster faggot’ll need ye olde plow to get outta this hole
tbhonest & bold, I’da yanked the strap if this Amish Buggy got outta control.

vote: This may come down to personal preference, I'm going with Schadenfreude. He had more lines that I personally liked and his flow was better. Cash was dope, but he had that one super stretched line that I didn't really like and compared to Schad's style, wasn't as efficient with his rhymes. (I really liked how Schad was going with the inner-to-outer rhyme scheme.)

Note from Richard: Ooop, looks like my vote is going to be really unpopular, lol. I understand if you dismiss it, I have been gone for awhile.
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Uh oh and lebron lines were heaters. Nice take on a ceiling fan line too.

Schadenfreude wasnt hittimg for me. Space jam was cool but i saw more focus on internal rhyming then punching, which doesnt have as much impact bar for bar in this situation

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