04-04-2016, 06:09 AM | #1 |
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04-04-2016, 09:26 AM | #2 |
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04-04-2016, 09:30 AM | #3 |
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04-04-2016, 03:01 PM | #4 |
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Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007 |
04-05-2016, 06:44 AM | #5 |
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Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!" You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet |
04-05-2016, 01:34 PM | #6 |
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Pretty good verse, u use crisp wording which makes the impact of your punches a lot heavier, than they would be otherwise.
versus This was mediocre drop tbh, the word wasn't as polished as your usual & those concept weren't fresh enough to make up for it. Overall HABITAT took it, maybe Wan took him light or was just being lazy..Idk. |
04-05-2016, 06:14 PM | #7 |
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Join Date: Mar 2016 Posts: 24 Rep Power:25526 Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors I like the wordplay collide a scope but came off more of a,statement then a directed punch I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away Seen this wordplay done before nice flip on it So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place Dope nameplay and direct punch Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter I like the wordplay and all but i felt wording wise couldve been more polished shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007 Nice nameplay Wander Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab Setup and finish didnt tie in together both were irrelevant with each other put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game I liked the direction of the punch but paper on the head not sure what drinking game reference ties into it See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting Lol ok better reference good flip You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to Played Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!" You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet Wording was bad Hab has some creative nameplays and some better of attempts i felt he couldve polished up better. Wandee not much from him wording hurt him a ton only line that stood out was the Police Record line. V/Hab |
04-06-2016, 09:48 AM | #8 |
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kaleidoscope was decent
didn't like altar boy much at all wanderlust was okay apparel is way too played n there wasn't a fresh twist on it wanderlei was done by resin already this seas vs habit broken was decent paper on ur head/drinking game was a nice concept, but the wording was iffy police record was funny, I liked it seen manhandle done before n this one wasn't special closer was whack v/wanderer
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04-06-2016, 11:08 PM | #9 |
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Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors ^ Thought this was cool, but I also think it was sort of a reach, but cool none the less I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away ^ idk didn't really hit for me but was okay So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place ^ hmm alright Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter ^ I like this wordplay shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007 ^ yeah this was cool too Wander: Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab ^okay-ish put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game ^ kinda iffy to me, but alright See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting ^ I feel it. You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to ^ Not too fresh a concept, or that hard either. Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!" You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet ^ thought this was alright too. I think I got Hab taking this, just a better overall verse, Wander had a lot of cool concepts but just didn't execute them that well to be honest. So I got Hab, cool drops to both though! Vote - Hab |
04-07-2016, 01:17 AM | #10 |
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When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors cool wp I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away decent cuz wording So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place this was cool Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter alright shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007 wanderlei been done and this flip was soft Vs Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab this could have been a lot better if the wording was better and dif setup put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game ehh decent at best See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting lol good You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to alright Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!" You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet ooo this was nice even tho wording wasn't too good Habitat loves wordplay I see. His verse was pretty good, consistent with only one bar I wasn't feeling really. Pretty sure he's an alias. Wan had some good content in his verse but it felt very rushed due to poor wording and choice of set ups. I'm going with habitat in this one. Vote Habitat
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04-07-2016, 08:12 AM | #11 |
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Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors - pretty cool wordplay & the imagery was good. I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place - gay jokes << Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter - tired wordplay & the rhyme isn't very good shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007 - okay punch. wording was kinda weird. Wanderer: Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab - haaa I liked this. nice inner multi. put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game - cool concept, weird wording See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting - it's good but I've heard this before You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to - gay jokes << Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!" You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet - again, it's good, but I've heard this before (a lot) vote Wanderer |
04-08-2016, 09:21 AM | #12 |
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Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007 I dug it all but the altar, boy line. dunno, for whatever reason that line just was meh to me. Everything else I liked. Cool wp with kaleidoscope, apparel, and the nameplays (particularly the closer, was pretty dope). Wanderer: Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!" You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet Those were the lines I dug from u. Cool shit, you had some interesting concepts as well, but i just feel like Habitat executed his a little better. Came across w/ more sting. Good reads from both... v/ Habitat |
04-08-2016, 10:59 AM | #13 |
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I give this one to Wand.
Hab had some seriously crisp wording but I've seen all of the concepts before, and some we're really old lol. but fresh wording/flips. Where Wand's critique is pretty similar, just that his paper on head, and teachers pet concepts were fresh to me. Esp the Paper on head, I've played that game. So vote Wand for being a lil fresher. Dope battle, both dropt nice verses. |
04-09-2016, 06:21 PM | #14 |
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Kaleidoscope, altar boy
Vs. Manhandle Those were the standouts. No real misses from either guy. I had Habitat taking this one. He had one more quotable and his verse felt a bit more harsh to me. Habitat. |
04-10-2016, 01:58 PM | #15 |
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Hab: opener, wanderlust
Wand: drinking game, manhandle This one's close and you both had some nice punches. I got hab as slightly more consistent. Vote =Habit |
04-10-2016, 03:54 PM | #16 |
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Hab- opener
Wand - paper on head, manhandle I feel like I'm gonna go for wand with this it was very close I was close to quoting alter boy for Hab but seen stuff like that before felt like you polished up a lot of old concepts, wand came a bit fresher overall decent battle but got wand edging it |
04-10-2016, 03:57 PM | #17 |
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Habitat had alter boy & wanderlust
Vs Opener, paper on ur head was fire & teachers pet was decent Wanderer barely edges this one. Cool battle |
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habitat had the best line but wander was super consistent and edged him out v/wander |
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04-10-2016, 11:36 PM | #19 |
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Wanderlust was nice. Apparel was decent. Wanderlei was creative.
Vs Sting line was worded well and hit effectively. Manhandle was aight. Vote habitat
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04-11-2016, 12:45 AM | #20 |
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Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors ^kaleidoscope is played I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away ^dope So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place ^cool Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter ^dope shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007 ^not sure if its pronounced wanderlei or vanderlei but decent punch overall Vs. Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab ^barely put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game ^dope See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting ^cool You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to ^cool Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!" You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet ^dope Vote- wanderer in a good close one |
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