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11-12-2018, 07:27 AM | #1 |
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Round 1: Wolverine vs. Cyclops - CYCLOPS WINS
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1. YOU MUST VOTE ON ALL BATTLES INCLUDING YOUR OWN!!! 2. You will post your vote on your normal name, and explain your vote. Please let’s not be complete lazy bastards and drop dog shit votes, put some effort into that shit. When you vote on your own battle, try not to make it so obvious as to who you are - personally idc but it’s for your own benefit tbh. 3. Minimum line limit is 10 / Maximum is 16 4. ONLY ONE EXTENTION ALLOWED PER BATTLER! NO EXCEPTIONS! You will have ample amounts of time each week to post your verses, all battles will always be posted on time and on schedule, no excuses. So if you need an extension, PM a mod, don’t post in your thread. 5. Battles will be set on Sunday night or Monday morning. Verses will be due by Friday night. Voting will end on Sunday. - NO BITING - NO RECYCLING - NO CHEATING - NO SWAYING Wolverine Cyclops |
11-12-2018, 08:44 AM | #2 |
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11-13-2018, 07:26 AM | #3 |
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11-16-2018, 10:28 PM | #4 |
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11-17-2018, 09:02 PM | #5 |
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Wolverine’s Verse:
You look like a fucking scuba-diver… With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it, Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits. Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance, Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand. So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes, Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses. Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge, Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends. So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight? Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night! That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics, Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status. So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team. |
11-19-2018, 03:10 PM | #6 | |
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11-17-2018, 09:03 PM | #7 |
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Cyclops’ Verse:
Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun.. Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper? We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part.. You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky.. Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill.. Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch.. & How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch? Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams.. No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team |
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11-19-2018, 02:07 AM | #9 | ||
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11-19-2018, 03:14 PM | #10 | |
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This is close to be real, some real nice ish in both verses along with a few dry spots each I actually have Wolverine winning here, just seemed to be more I liked to be real Cyclops had some shit though, can see it going either way
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11-18-2018, 08:47 AM | #11 |
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You look like a fucking scuba-diver…
With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it, Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits. nah not feelin Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance, Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand. dope concept but executed a bit weird. Overall pretty cool So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes, Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses. what? Lol nah Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge, Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends. alright So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight? Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night! nah That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics, Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status. ha, slick. Good shit So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team. flight from a chair/prof x had crazy potential for something dope but you finished it mildly 2 good 1 ok 1 Decent 3 misses Vs Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun.. Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run hmm not feelin X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper? We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker alright, good usage Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part.. You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart nice all around Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky.. Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body ha alright Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill.. Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film i mean yeah but where’s the punch? Dissing him for not having enough bald headed people in his car? Lol or are you referring to a desert eagle. Pretty indirect if you are You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch.. & How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch? ha, cool Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams.. No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team not bad 3 good 2 ok 2 misses Good battle here. Wolverine had a pretty good verse, had some strong and weak parts to it but overall it was a decent enough showing. Cyclops made much more use of his gimmick I believe, including a lot of actual references to his opponents character. I’m not grading solely based on that, you can’t jyst type up a bunch of marvel citation statements and expect them to have impact lol. But nah Cyclops did good here and takes the battle by a decent margin. Vote Cyclops |
11-18-2018, 10:50 PM | #12 |
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With stupid, silly mutant-abilities however you analyse it,
Laser-beams from the eye-balls? more like acute conjunctivits. kinda funny Plus Marvel-Girl taught me biology, said you were whack at romance, Bub, I know every part of Greys anatomy: like the back of my hand. solid, even though greys anatomy bars in general just feel cliche to me So fuck your ruby-quartz, this dudes a dork worthy of uber-classes, Wolvie'll shatter his optimistim along with those rose coloured glasses. I like the concept, not sure it was as effective as it couldve been with the execution Leaving your lenses smashed bub, best start your plans for revenge, Logan leaves all bitches ragged, and I wore-out and tore Jeans like fashion trends. Nah So scientifically you absorb sunlight and transform it into your eye-sight? Then it seems to me your powers would be COMPLETELY USELESS at night! Kinda funny but not really hitting That’s when fighting matters, your long in the tooth and still not nice with tactics, Cyclops, you simply don’t compare to Wolvie...incisor status. ok So these Trident claws in your spinal cord, leave you with the optic-beams Fight from a chair, at least Professor X wont be the only retard on the team. kinda funny, ok closer. Optic Beam's on point nigga, better sprint like a smokin gun.. Cuz if you in my visors sight? Allll we'll see is a bleak future for Logans Run eh X-Mens black sheep, 'bub'...Adamantium got ya feeling hyper? We all have skeletons in our closet, while your original is kept by William Stryker this is cool Feral dog never had a chance w/ Jean, should've known ya part.. You're immortal, but it's too bad that Healing Factor couldnt fix a broken heart this felt kinda corny tbh, almost made me cringe Bullet in ya head gave amnesia, memory was fuckin rocky.. Creep, Days of Future's Past wasnt the 1st time you were in a much younger body this was ok Leader gives me access to weapons that'd send you to a landfill.. Heavy guns & ammo, only bald head in your backseat is driving Xavier in the last film nah You created to be THE Killing Machine but height was an inch.. & How were you Weapon X but use 'Claw & Bite' tactics that make ya fight like a bitch? nah Honestly Wolv yo head been fucked up, why scream in your dreams.. No Danger Room drill. Next 'Cyke Eval' will leave ya ass gettin kicked off my team ok closer idk I'm probably gonna go against the grain on this but I felt like wolverine's verse was better. plus 'you look like a fucking scuba diver' was probably lotb mvgt - wolverine |
11-19-2018, 10:41 AM | #13 |
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3-2 Cyclops
Needs more votes @Aero @King Karaoke @Blue Bayou @BodySnatcher @Jabari Black @Infiltrate @Plot @sraL @Chyeahhh!!! @Innovator @MFtastick @Jit @Destroyer Last edited by For Battling; 11-19-2018 at 04:04 PM. |
11-19-2018, 09:58 PM | #14 |
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Oh well
Cyclops Wins 3-2 |
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