Round 1 - 4: Rayge vs. 13: Lecture - {Rayge wins}

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@Rayge @Lecture

[Maximus]

Haha..in
10-12 its all i have time for homie

[Lecture]

@Rayge ..
I went 10, I'm done.

edit by knuck

Progression is evolution the old gets replaced by the new, over time
which is why I cant see R with the W unless we're moving.. in rewind
See I stay on my grind, I get better w/every line I write u can measure
unless the voters are fucking nerds, there wont be Rayge over a Lecture
I give 'em bars that they can treasure, advanced with the rhymes
this match was your grave..
my punches are just the rectangle outline & array within the lines
The uneducated wont get that, so here let me dumb it down
graves are rectangle in shape - a Ray / array - its beautiful
how I'm puttin his ass in the ground
& I dont wanna hear a sound about how I'll lose to this clown
when I'm battling next week & your out the league
..thats how we both move a round.

[Maximus]

@Lecture
.
.
we obviously cant be compared cos this noob's flow is sketchy
my wording's smooth while Lexis sloppy cos he cant use those correctly
Atomic & other dudes had him running from da site, his nemesis is here
claims he's a rapper who Spitz to get that Cake...but they're both threats to his career
u're feeble, cant stop me from champing this cos im beating my rivals
just like colleges, its easy to get through a Lecture & proceed to da finals
u should study da periodic table before ur drowning starts, the time's near
& talking elements... u'll need more than Helium to rise & O2 to survive there
u're gonna die bitch, these deadly combos will rip your spine quick
fuck teaching aids, da only chalk for this Lecture's da one he'll get outlined with
10

@Lecture

[People Are Fucking Idiots]

cant drop:
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?p=101542#post101542

Some jack ass limited my account & its in my PMs.

[Greed]

Rayge over a lecture was slick, wasn't feeling much else. Lot of filler for a 10 line bout.

V rayge

First 6 were okay jabs. Less misses overall.

[Boredom]

lecture:
your wording and concepts made for a very awkward read with not much impact, the only bar that hit for me was rayge over lecture. all in all not a very consistent verse.

rayge:
decently consistent with little jabs through out, no major haymakers but more than enough to get the win.

mvgt rayge

[Dominate]

Originally Posted by Lecture

@Rayge ..
I went 10, I'm done.

edit by knuck

Progression is evolution the old gets replaced by the new, over time
which is why I cant see R with the W unless we're moving.. in rewind
----- ok as far as letter nameplays go
See I stay on my grind, I get better w/every line I write u can measure
unless the voters are fucking nerds, there wont be Rayge over a Lecture
----- cool np/self np
I give 'em bars that they can treasure, advanced with the rhymes
this match was your grave..
my punches are just the rectangle outline & array within the lines
----- okayyyy... The grave/rectangle connection is a bit weak
The uneducated wont get that, so here let me dumb it down
graves are rectangle in shape - a Ray / array - its beautiful
how I'm puttin his ass in the ground
----- nooo... Waste of a bar
& I dont wanna hear a sound about how I'll lose to this clown
when I'm battling next week & your out the league
..thats how we both move a round
----- any 'round' wps have been done. You gotta have a REALLY creative or harsh flip to make it work. This didnt do it.

Originally Posted by Rayge

@Lecture
.
.
we obviously cant be compared cos this noob's flow is sketchy
my wording's smooth while Lexis sloppy cos he cant use those correctly
----- good np. Smooth wording
Atomic & other dudes had him running from da site, his nemesis is here
claims he's a rapper who Spitz to get that Cake...but they're both threats to his career
----- ok personal/s, wp wasn't too creative
u're feeble, cant stop me from champing this cos im beating my rivals
just like colleges, its easy to get through a Lecture & proceed to da finals
----- not bad. Simple wps, but relevant
u should study da periodic table before ur drowning starts, the time's near
& talking elements... u'll need more than Helium to rise & O2 to survive there
----- ehhh... Relevant but I've seen so many elements wps recently
u're gonna die bitch, these deadly combos will rip your spine quick
fuck teaching aids, da only chalk for this Lecture's da one he'll get outlined with
----- cool
10

Rayge got it. Wording was smoother throughout which helped his bars come off better. Thought his opener was lotb while lecture had a miss with that explanation bar. The rest from both was ok/decent

V: Rayge

[Sharp]

See I stay on my grind, I get better w/every line I write u can measure
unless the voters are fucking nerds, there wont be Rayge over a Lecture



nah @ rewind. the array line coulda been worded better and if you have explain your bar that just means its not worded well. the whole thing leading up to 'a round' was messy/sounded freestyled and didnt really do anything for that weak flip



we obviously cant be compared cos this noob's flow is sketchy
my wording's smooth while Lexis sloppy cos he cant use those correctly
u're feeble, cant stop me from champing this cos im beating my rivals
just like colleges, its easy to get through a Lecture & proceed to da finals
u should study da periodic table before ur drowning starts, the time's near
& talking elements... u'll need more than Helium to rise & O2 to survive there

no big misses, solid

rayge was just a lot more consistent. lecture fell off at the end and kinda sabotaged himself

v/rayge

[TheEnd]

See I stay on my grind, I get better w/every line I write u can measure
unless the voters are fucking nerds, there wont be Rayge over a Lecture


vs.


we obviously cant be compared cos this noob's flow is sketchy
my wording's smooth while Lexis sloppy cos he cant use those correctly
u're feeble, cant stop me from champing this cos im beating my rivals
just like colleges, its easy to get through a Lecture & proceed to da finals
u should study da periodic table before ur drowning starts, the time's near
& talking elements... u'll need more than Helium to rise & O2 to survive there

ray had better punches n worded his shit better, lec had that 1 punch that was ok

V/Ray