Round 1 - 3: Dominate vs. 14: Boredom - {Dominate wins}

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@Dominate @Boredom

[Dominate]

Check

10?

[Boredom]

Sounds good.

@Dominate @Boredom

[Dominate]

‘bitch move’ is an understatement. That shit was lowly & sad
Against me Ur Numbers Up.. cuz ur ONLY chance of winning was me not noticing that
Pussy. Now u getting this work & u can’t even call it heartless
When the fact ur a faggot’s so Chrystal Clear it could acquit Rawn of all his charges
Can’t beat me Legitimately. He’s finished if I type a post so
I’m Above Board cuz I’m better & cuz I’m not a bitch who gets by on no shows
Plus he ducked Sharp for weeks so it’s obv he lacks w/ the ethics
Ain’t commenting on GOW or Delicious Girl posts when I say Syntactics pathetic
His mom fucks in toilet blocks.. yup, the sight of it’s wretched
& this faggot got Stall Manoeuvres that could rival his night of conception




Don't no show plz.

[Boredom]

blah..

I get dime broads n push a benz, u will always remain a fag
when dom’s pushin a whip it involves guys in leather, chains and gags
I don’t even need to flex on this goof, ur a twix away from bein a fat joke
Domino he’d get smashed into a table like playin that game w/ black folk
Ur soft n frail so don’t try n act tough or I’ll leave this fraud impaled
Faggot the only time you’ve been behind bars is visiting rawn in jail
I could post pics of dimes I’ve fucked, if u claim that ur a lying homo
only time dom posts a 10 is pulling a bitch move tryna win by no show
if u lose this round in the sc. u’ll post beyond walls of text u talentless geek
strik will have u on a strict diet, ending ur life by drinking galons of bleach.

[Untold]

damn.. this is ones hard to call

‘bitch move’ is an understatement. That shit was lowly & sad
Against me Ur Numbers Up.. cuz ur ONLY chance of winning was me not noticing that
Pussy. Now u getting this work & u can’t even call it heartless
When the fact ur a faggot’s so Chrystal Clear it could acquit Rawn of all his charges
Plus he ducked Sharp for weeks so it’s obv he lacks w/ the ethics
Ain’t commenting on GOW or Delicious Girl posts when I say Syntactics pathetic
His mom fucks in toilet blocks.. yup, the sight of it’s wretched
& this faggot got Stall Manoeuvres that could rival his night of conception

vs

I get dime broads n push a benz, u will always remain a fag
when dom’s pushin a whip it involves guys in leather, chains and gags
I don’t even need to flex on this goof, ur a twix away from bein a fat joke
Domino he’d get smashed into a table like playin that game w/ black folk
Ur soft n frail so don’t try n act tough or I’ll leave this fraud impaled
Faggot the only time you’ve been behind bars is visiting rawn in jail
I could post pics of dimes I’ve fucked, if u claim that ur a lying homo
only time dom posts a 10 is pulling a bitch move tryna win by no show

i quoted a lot in this battle but then again i thought both verses were consistent as fuck. really enjoyed the read and actually had to reread a few times. Dom came out swingin and came harsh with his punches. literally had to look up a few punches, which i don't think is bad, made me think a bit more out the box. only line i really wasn't feeling was his "Above Board" line and i guess because it was so straight forward and because i know he hasn't won everything by no-shows. and Shank also had a mad consistent verse, but some of the lines weren't as hard hitting as Dom's. like both had Rawn lines and i felt Dom's a bit more because of the complexity. but i do enjoy's Shanks style. very direct and he's got some crisp wording and cool concepts. all in all, this was a good battle and pretty evenly matched. but Dom edged it for me. props to both.

v/ Dominate

[Greed]

Stall vs. Whip and domino

V boredom

Both Rawn lines and no show lines cancel each other out

[Xnub]

Originally Posted by Dominate

‘bitch move’ is an understatement. That shit was lowly & sad
Against me Ur Numbers Up.. cuz ur ONLY chance of winning was me not noticing that
not feelings this
Pussy. Now u getting this work & u can’t even call it heartless
When the fact ur a faggot’s so Chrystal Clear it could acquit Rawn of all his charges
eh...
Can’t beat me Legitimately. He’s finished if I type a post so
I’m Above Board cuz I’m better & cuz I’m not a bitch who gets by on no shows
wasn't too harsh, cool tho
Plus he ducked Sharp for weeks so it’s obv he lacks w/ the ethics
Ain’t commenting on GOW or Delicious Girl posts when I say Syntactics pathetic
feeling this line, coo
His mom fucks in toilet blocks.. yup, the sight of it’s wretched
& this faggot got Stall Manoeuvres that could rival his night of conception
your lotb, this was slick and very fresh.




Don't no show plz.

Originally Posted by Boredom

blah..

I get dime broads n push a benz, u will always remain a fag
when dom’s pushin a whip it involves guys in leather, chains and gags
na. connection is weak
I don’t even need to flex on this goof, ur a twix away from bein a fat joke
Domino he’d get smashed into a table like playin that game w/ black folk
na....
Ur soft n frail so don’t try n act tough or I’ll leave this fraud impaled
Faggot the only time you’ve been behind bars is visiting rawn in jail
na.... worse than his rawn punch
I could post pics of dimes I’ve fucked, if u claim that ur a lying homo
only time dom posts a 10 is pulling a bitch move tryna win by no show
almost seems like a feed now, but the flow is getting monotonous
if u lose this round in the sc. u’ll post beyond walls of text u talentless geek
strik will have u on a strict diet, ending ur life by drinking galons of bleach.
predictable, no real connection to me...

Not hate to boredom, he came legit... Dom is in another league though and took this pretty ez to me.

mvgt: Dom

[TheEnd]

Plus he ducked Sharp for weeks so it’s obv he lacks w/ the ethics
Ain’t commenting on GOW or Delicious Girl posts when I say Syntactics pathetic
His mom fucks in toilet blocks.. yup, the sight of it’s wretched
& this faggot got Stall Manoeuvres that could rival his night of conception


vs.

Nothing really

boredom not one of ur best verses nothing really hit n the wording wasnt that great, dom punches hit with some good concepts

V/Dom

Boredom seemed lazy as hell. Nothing super creative, and ur post a 10 punch was ridiculous since u posted numbers 7 hours before he did lmao.

Dom was ok, consistent enough to win. Had a couple hits nothing big no big misses.

V/ Dom

From phone at lunch, will break down further when I get home if its wanted

[Sharp]

‘bitch move’ is an understatement. That shit was lowly & sad
Against me Ur Numbers Up.. cuz ur ONLY chance of winning was me not noticing that
Pussy. Now u getting this work & u can’t even call it heartless
When the fact ur a faggot’s so Chrystal Clear it could acquit Rawn of all his charges
Plus he ducked Sharp for weeks so it’s obv he lacks w/ the ethics
Ain’t commenting on GOW or Delicious Girl posts when I say Syntactics pathetic


board connection was there but its done. almost quoted stall manuvers


I get dime broads n push a benz, u will always remain a fag
when dom’s pushin a whip it involves guys in leather, chains and gags
I could post pics of dimes I’ve fucked, if u claim that ur a lying homo
only time dom posts a 10 is pulling a bitch move tryna win by no show

domino's played. behind bars coulda been cooler. strict/strik connection's kinda played

like how you both had good lines about the 1-10 stuff lol. thought dom was more consistent overall tho, better hits as well. battle of the round for sure

v/dom

[Maximus]

¡®bitch move¡¯ is an understatement. That shit was lowly & sad
Against me Ur Numbers Up.. cuz ur ONLY chance of winning was me not noticing that
MILD HIT
Pussy. Now u getting this work & u can¡¯t even call it heartless
When the fact ur a faggot¡¯s so Chrystal Clear it could acquit Rawn of all his charges
OK CURRENT EVENT FLIP
Can¡¯t beat me Legitimately. He¡¯s finished if I type a post so
I¡¯m Above Board cuz I¡¯m better & cuz I¡¯m not a bitch who gets by on no shows
WORDING WAS KINDA EHH AND PUNCH WASNT THAT STRONG
Plus he ducked Sharp for weeks so it¡¯s obv he lacks w/ the ethics
Ain¡¯t commenting on GOW or Delicious Girl posts when I say Syntactics pathetic
COOL NAMEPLAY
His mom fucks in toilet blocks.. yup, the sight of it¡¯s wretched
& this faggot got Stall Manoeuvres that could rival his night of conception
OK CLOSER
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i expected more tbh but that doesnt mean this verse fell short, shit was solid, only bar i didnt really like much was the above board line, evrything else were decent jabs
vs
I get dime broads n push a benz, u will always remain a fag
when dom¡¯s pushin a whip it involves guys in leather, chains and gags
OK BUT COULDA BEEN BETTER IMO
I don¡¯t even need to flex on this goof, ur a twix away from bein a fat joke
Domino he¡¯d get smashed into a table like playin that game w/ black folk
SEEN THIS NP BEFORE
Ur soft n frail so don¡¯t try n act tough or I¡¯ll leave this fraud impaled
Faggot the only time you¡¯ve been behind bars is visiting rawn in jail
EHH, HIS RAWN FLIP WAS BETTER
I could post pics of dimes I¡¯ve fucked, if u claim that ur a lying homo
only time dom posts a 10 is pulling a bitch move tryna win by no show
OK
if u lose this round in the sc. u¡¯ll post beyond walls of text u talentless geek
strik will have u on a strict diet, ending ur life by drinking galons of bleach.
WASNT FEELING MUCH
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This def fell below expectations, seems rushed.. Most of ur connections werent really strong enuff to impact damage to someone like dom, some ok shit here and there but just not enuff to see u thru
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That said MVGT/dom