KnowP Vs Apex - KNOWP WINS

[KwaL!ty]

you know the drill
10-12 due by midnight
house rules
check in sucka

@KnowP
@Apex

[Apex]

check, if he's in

[Apex]

@KnowP, should we close this or u still?

[KnowP]

@Apex, let's drop tomorrow. get ya links up

http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=9804
http://netcees.co/showthread.php?t=14035

[KnowP]

u still live with ya mommy, you never blowin sick weed
the zoo during mating season is the only time we see Ape fucking with trees
we all seen ya last battle, dude sucks, go figure
had a feeling that Yew sucked, n u confirmed it being smashed by that nigga
i got guns galore that'll leave this hooker bumbed
only Ammo you have in your jeans is the one you steal your concepts from
one punch'll leave this fag dismantled, see you on a stretcher
then ya gay ass will resort to take balls to the face more than a first string catcher
k will aims with precision, your life will be a quick lesson
i'll send you to meet the maker.... of my semi-automatic smith n wesson

[Apex]

damn did now u dropped, here's a quick 10




Pussy, patron, n bitch on a pole is how my p game stay really
so when its this.. we knowP, only in reference to the guy from pretty ricky
don’t be silly u touch kids but ur own ken though is just a sin
the apple don’t fall 2 far from the tree, which means his uncle touched him
moded for RA but never got respect, an known as a has been
the only thread you ever rayge’d in on RA, was the one he beat u in
stab em with a pen, u a fat fuck some say who’s status equal to a bum
so I knowP be stuffin foot longs down at subway, We’d just wish u’d get hit by one
son I mentor these kids in there pursuit to happiness, success n power
while P idea of men-tor is walking in a lockeroom full of boys in the shower


blah, quick 1
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=14035

[KnowP]

....

[KnowP]

dead. vote up

[Decibel]

Wow shits fucking wack with the votes here....

u still live with ya mommy, you never blowin sick weed
the zoo during mating season is the only time we see Ape fucking with trees
straight with the NP.. decent
we all seen ya last battle, dude sucks, go figure
had a feeling that Yew sucked, n u confirmed it being smashed by that nigga
Decent personal shot here.
i got guns galore that'll leave this hooker bumbed
only Ammo you have in your jeans is the one you steal your concepts from
Good shit.. decent hit again
one punch'll leave this fag dismantled, see you on a stretcher
then ya gay ass will resort to take balls to the face more than a first string catcher
Eh... feels kind of played to be honest
k will aims with precision, your life will be a quick lesson
i'll send you to meet the maker.... of my semi-automatic smith n wesson
Weak closer here.. seemed rush




Your first 3 bars were good stuff but then you slacked on the final 2. Decent hits for three of them though. Dont rush the finisher next time.



Pussy, patron, n bitch on a pole is how my p game stay really
so when its this.. we knowP, only in reference to the guy from pretty ricky
This was alright,... felt like it was worded weird though.
don’t be silly u touch kids but ur own ken though is just a sin
the apple don’t fall 2 far from the tree, which means his uncle touched him
For some odd reason not feeling this
moded for RA but never got respect, an known as a has been
the only thread you ever rayge’d in on RA, was the one he beat u in
Good personal dig here... solid shot.
stab em with a pen, u a fat fuck some say who’s status equal to a bum
so I knowP be stuffin foot longs down at subway, We’d just wish u’d get hit by one
Okay I guess
son I mentor these kids in there pursuit to happiness, success n power
while P idea of men-tor is walking in a lockeroom full of boys in the shower
Okay WP.. decent closer


Overall most of your stuff wasn't hitting. The only real decent shot was the Rayge personal and Men-tor lines.... otherwise didn't hit or worded weird..



Vote: Knowp for more consistent/stronger hits... decent battle.

[Boredom]

@Apex one more voting link broo

[Apex]

Originally Posted by Boredom

@Apex one more voting link broo

Franco vs. Meth voted on that

[StarFaggot]

Knowp:

u still live with ya mommy, you never blowin sick weed
the zoo during mating season is the only time we see Ape fucking with trees
nah bruh
we all seen ya last battle, dude sucks, go figure
had a feeling that Yew sucked, n u confirmed it being smashed by that nigga
ehh ok... super formulaic
i got guns galore that'll leave this hooker bumbed
only Ammo you have in your jeans is the one you steal your concepts from
pause.. formulaic but ok
one punch'll leave this fag dismantled, see you on a stretcher
then ya gay ass will resort to take balls to the face more than a first string catcher
not very creative
k will aims with precision, your life will be a quick lesson
i'll send you to meet the maker.... of my semi-automatic smith n wesson
you'd better be better off sending him to meet his maker than to accompany him to a trip to smith n Wesson gun assembly

Apex

Pussy, patron, n bitch on a pole is how my p game stay really
so when its this.. we knowP, only in reference to the guy from pretty ricky
no sir
don’t be silly u touch kids but ur own ken though is just a sin
the apple don’t fall 2 far from the tree, which means his uncle touched him
what? lol
moded for RA but never got respect, an known as a has been
the only thread you ever rayge’d in on RA, was the one he beat u in
nah, formulaic and not great nameplay
stab em with a pen, u a fat fuck some say who’s status equal to a bum
so I knowP be stuffin foot longs down at subway, We’d just wish u’d get hit by one
concepts been done man, but this was ok
son I mentor these kids in there pursuit to happiness, success n power
while P idea of men-tor is walking in a lockeroom full of boys in the shower
aiiight


Knowp barely wins this one. Not a great battle but look forward to reading more from you two.

[Tic]

Originally Posted by KnowP

u still live with ya mommy, you never blowin sick weed
the zoo during mating season is the only time we see Ape fucking with trees
I see what you're going for here. Could've been worded better, not terrible, but pretty simple.
we all seen ya last battle, dude sucks, go figure
had a feeling that Yew sucked, n u confirmed it being smashed by that nigga
I liked this. Nice wordplay with Yew, and a personal.
i got guns galore that'll leave this hooker bumbed
only Ammo you have in your jeans is the one you steal your concepts from
This is ok.
one punch'll leave this fag dismantled, see you on a stretcher
then ya gay ass will resort to take balls to the face more than a first string catcher
Ehhh. 'String' is really only a football term. Concept is funny, but meh.
k will aims with precision, your life will be a quick lesson
i'll send you to meet the maker.... of my semi-automatic smith n wesson
Wasn't feeling this as a closer. Should've had either your 2nd or 3rd bar as the closer.

Originally Posted by Apex

damn did now u dropped, here's a quick 10




Pussy, patron, n bitch on a pole is how my p game stay really
so when its this.. we knowP, only in reference to the guy from pretty ricky
Ha. Bit of a chuckle, not too hard hitting though.
don’t be silly u touch kids but ur own ken though is just a sin
the apple don’t fall 2 far from the tree, which means his uncle touched him
Unless this is true...no.
moded for RA but never got respect, an known as a has been
the only thread you ever rayge’d in on RA, was the one he beat u in
Eh....personal, ok. But not too hard hitting, worded poorly.
stab em with a pen, u a fat fuck some say who’s status equal to a bum
so I knowP be stuffin foot longs down at subway, We’d just wish u’d get hit by one
Chuckle at the end, but not a hard hitter. Justin Tuck eats Subway footlongs, does that make him a faggot?
son I mentor these kids in there pursuit to happiness, success n power
while P idea of men-tor is walking in a lockeroom full of boys in the shower
Ehhh. Not a great closer.


blah, quick 1
http://www.netcees.co/showthread.php?t=14035

Both of you had ehh verses. Need to work on wording them effectively and executing the final punch. With shortbar, you really want to attack your opponent in each line. Can't really have a setup and then punch, unless the punch is a haymaker. Decent battle I guess.

Vote - KnowP

He was more direct and his punches were a bit more hard hitting.

[KnowP]

upping

[e11even]

KnowP

u still live with ya mommy, you never blowin sick weed
the zoo during mating season is the only time we see Ape fucking with trees
Kinda elementary, but still a relevant punch in this battle
we all seen ya last battle, dude sucks, go figure
had a feeling that Yew sucked, n u confirmed it being smashed by that nigga
Cool wording, good personal...
i got guns galore that'll leave this hooker bumbed
only Ammo you have in your jeans is the one you steal your concepts from
Bad setup line, with a repeat punch, but decent hit
one punch'll leave this fag dismantled, see you on a stretcher
then ya gay ass will resort to take balls to the face more than a first string catcher
pretty played but still made me chuckle
k will aims with precision, your life will be a quick lesson
i'll send you to meet the maker.... of my semi-automatic smith n wesson
horrible punch, shoulda made this make sense


Apex

Pussy, patron, n bitch on a pole is how my p game stay really
so when its this.. we knowP, only in reference to the guy from pretty ricky
Not well thought out, but understood the intention... meh punch
don’t be silly u touch kids but ur own ken though is just a sin
the apple don’t fall 2 far from the tree, which means his uncle touched him
not a great setup, badly worded punch
moded for RA but never got respect, an known as a has been
the only thread you ever rayge’d in on RA, was the one he beat u in
good punch, solid personal for this verse
stab em with a pen, u a fat fuck some say who’s status equal to a bum
so I knowP be stuffin foot longs down at subway, We’d just wish u’d get hit by one
i liked the nameplay, and I dig the punch
son I mentor these kids in there pursuit to happiness, success n power
while P idea of men-tor is walking in a lockeroom full of boys in the shower
I see the intention, but the nameplay didn't entirely hit, but a decent closer



KnowP edged this. It really came down to who managed to fuck up less. Not a horrible battle, but could have been better.

[Boredom]

both had a lot of misses, but all in all knowp was a bit more consistent and had better wording/execution. mvgt knowp