Plot (2-1) vs Greed (2-1) - PLOT WINS

Sharp · 12-13-2013, 02:22 PM

NBL Season 7
Week 6

Due Wednesday, December 18th

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Plot · 12-14-2013, 05:45 AM

check, 10 lines

Greed · 12-17-2013, 11:20 PM

I think you are wack. I was no showed last round and am waiting for you to go first.

Plot · 12-18-2013, 01:29 PM

Ext?

Plot · 12-19-2013, 11:23 AM

Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing,
Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving.
He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view.
60-40 to win against the NC punching bag, hes got no authority,
Yeah he's really dope! but If you disagreed, you'd be in the majority.
Thinks his all gangster but he's just a wack job like hit lists,
He aint no fucking Corleone, but I'll give this greaseball the business.
Dude aint got no game he's a no show, like shop window exhibits
So I'm just walking all over this dead beat, like Mall Cops on Christmas.

Greed · 12-20-2013, 02:49 AM

If you thought after that verse against apex youd be respected your an asshole
No quotables.. the real missing link was the one that redirected me to another battle
With generic setups weak concepts and punchlines that r far from great
If the plot thickens its due to a large supply of snicker bars and cupcakes
Your always missing something important, that's why your wack and whatnot
You couldnt be captain cause you'd have to take a pilot i's away if you want plot
My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts
Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout
U the weakest kid on earth fam, tags on your life should be i remember my first grand
With a pic thats captioned glasses jacket shirt.. call me glasses jacket shirt man

KwaL!ty · 12-21-2013, 09:09 PM

The opener wAs a light jab it was current but obvious .. The basement wall was a miss no sting there ... The majority was no real punch just a different way of calling him whack.... The mafia tie line was weak the set up was shit bags ... The Christmas mall line was a clear miss as we'll nothing really there ...

Va

I kind of liked the opener from greed to me it connected pretty well ... The plot thickens line could have sting with better wording but ended as a light jab in the end ... The pilot light was nothing was pretty much a miss. ... The xbox ended up as a jab could have been something but the wording kind of tortured it ... Wtf was the jacket shirt man that was a baffling bar like WTF that lost me ..

This battle was kind of even but I have to give it to greed for better jabs and attempts..

Vote greed

Orc · 12-27-2013, 05:55 AM

I enjoyed plots verse better. Fresher with better concepts. Liked corleone line. Greed had plot thickens but thats been done. Vote gplot. Cool batt

ill nik-A · 12-27-2013, 09:09 AM

Well this was just weird, plot ur set ups could work if ur punches were constructed better, I get the simplified version of them but u must follow it up with a sting, just an observation...
Greed, uve been battling for a while and yet ur concepts are no where near better, I guess ur attempts were better but nothing worth quoting

Vote greed I guess

Plot · 12-28-2013, 02:23 PM

Cmon voters

King Karaoke · 12-29-2013, 06:57 PM

Hi...

Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing,
Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving.
He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view.

first two lines were worded pretty well...
Mall cop line could have been as good but wording was a bit off...

didn't like anything from the other guy...
I felt that his lines were very forced or just didn't make sense at all...

Vote- Plot...

Bye...

Unfukwitable · 12-29-2013, 11:16 PM

He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view.

vs
My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts
Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout

best line from both wasn't to great tho tbh ... bad wording seems like rushed drops Imo ..v/Plot

Tic · 12-30-2013, 09:37 AM

Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing,
Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving.
He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view.
60-40 to win against the NC punching bag, hes got no authority,
Yeah he's really dope! but If you disagreed, you'd be in the majority.

Vs.

My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts
Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout

V/Plot - Best verse I've seen from you, Plot. Good stuff. Greed, idk I wasn't really feeling any of your verse at all. The one line above was ok, otherwise the wording was all weird and the concepts really weren't there either.

Lotto Smirk · 12-31-2013, 11:29 AM

Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing,
Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving.
He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew,
So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view

vs
My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts
Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout

vote- Plot overall better hits/misses

12-19-2013, 11:23 AM	#5
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing, Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving. He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew, So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view. 60-40 to win against the NC punching bag, hes got no authority, Yeah he's really dope! but If you disagreed, you'd be in the majority. Thinks his all gangster but he's just a wack job like hit lists, He aint no fucking Corleone, but I'll give this greaseball the business. Dude aint got no game he's a no show, like shop window exhibits So I'm just walking all over this dead beat, like Mall Cops on Christmas. Last edited by Plot; 12-19-2013 at 12:40 PM.

12-27-2013, 09:09 AM	#9
ill nik-A Super Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 7,411 Battle Record: 70-25 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - Battle Arena - BA Picture - Picture Battle Tournament - Netcees Battle League (3x) - Netcees Writers League (2x) - Summer Classic VI - Fall Brawl III - Netcees Battle League Season X - Lyric Olympics Rep Power: 77164516	Well this was just weird, plot ur set ups could work if ur punches were constructed better, I get the simplified version of them but u must follow it up with a sting, just an observation... Greed, uve been battling for a while and yet ur concepts are no where near better, I guess ur attempts were better but nothing worth quoting Vote greed I guess __________________ Grumpy old man.

12-29-2013, 06:57 PM	#11
King Karaoke Stackin' wins... Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,515 Battle Record: 61-20 Accomplishments - 50 Wins Champed - Survivor Tournament - Netcees Battle League (6x) - Netcees Gimmick Tournament Rep Power: 10353694	Hi... Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing, Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving. He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew, So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view. first two lines were worded pretty well... Mall cop line could have been as good but wording was a bit off... didn't like anything from the other guy... I felt that his lines were very forced or just didn't make sense at all... Vote- Plot... Bye... __________________ the Outsiders Orc \| ill nik-A \| Sn00p \| King Karaoke

12-14-2013, 05:45 AM	#2
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	check, 10 lines

12-17-2013, 11:20 PM	#3
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975684	I think you are wack. I was no showed last round and am waiting for you to go first.

12-18-2013, 01:29 PM	#4
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Ext?

12-20-2013, 02:49 AM	#6
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975684	If you thought after that verse against apex youd be respected your an asshole No quotables.. the real missing link was the one that redirected me to another battle With generic setups weak concepts and punchlines that r far from great If the plot thickens its due to a large supply of snicker bars and cupcakes Your always missing something important, that's why your wack and whatnot You couldnt be captain cause you'd have to take a pilot i's away if you want plot My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout U the weakest kid on earth fam, tags on your life should be i remember my first grand With a pic thats captioned glasses jacket shirt.. call me glasses jacket shirt man

12-21-2013, 09:09 PM	#7
KwaL!ty Senior Member Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,170 Battle Record: 21-15 Rep Power: 0	The opener wAs a light jab it was current but obvious .. The basement wall was a miss no sting there ... The majority was no real punch just a different way of calling him whack.... The mafia tie line was weak the set up was shit bags ... The Christmas mall line was a clear miss as we'll nothing really there ... Va I kind of liked the opener from greed to me it connected pretty well ... The plot thickens line could have sting with better wording but ended as a light jab in the end ... The pilot light was nothing was pretty much a miss. ... The xbox ended up as a jab could have been something but the wording kind of tortured it ... Wtf was the jacket shirt man that was a baffling bar like WTF that lost me .. This battle was kind of even but I have to give it to greed for better jabs and attempts.. Vote greed

12-27-2013, 05:55 AM	#8
Orc Certified Mother’s Boy Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 5,165 Battle Record: 5-1 Accomplishments - Hall of Fame Champed - NBL Season 4 - GBL Season 1 - Lyric Olympics - Fight Night LXVI - Fight Night LX - Fight Night (3x) - NBL Picture Roast - Netcees Battle League (8x) - NBL Picture League - Gimmick Battle League - BA Tag Team - 1-2 Punch League - NBL Cypher (3x) - Battle Arena League - OM HOF (2x) Rep Power: 85899390	I enjoyed plots verse better. Fresher with better concepts. Liked corleone line. Greed had plot thickens but thats been done. Vote gplot. Cool batt

12-28-2013, 02:23 PM	#10
Plot Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,376 Battle Record: 26-32 Rep Power: 1309741	Cmon voters

12-29-2013, 11:16 PM	#12
Unfukwitable baz∞ka Join Date: Aug 2013 Posts: 1,628 Battle Record: 38-35 Champed - Fight Night 7 - Battle Arena Tournament - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 36460385	He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew, So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view. vs My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout best line from both wasn't to great tho tbh ... bad wording seems like rushed drops Imo ..v/Plot

12-30-2013, 09:37 AM	#13
Tic Senior Member Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 1,509 Battle Record: 51-29 Champed - Newbie Tourney VII - Netcees Battle League Rep Power: 20137906	Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing, Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving. He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew, So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view. 60-40 to win against the NC punching bag, hes got no authority, Yeah he's really dope! but If you disagreed, you'd be in the majority. Vs. My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout V/Plot - Best verse I've seen from you, Plot. Good stuff. Greed, idk I wasn't really feeling any of your verse at all. The one line above was ok, otherwise the wording was all weird and the concepts really weren't there either.

12-31-2013, 11:29 AM	#14
Lotto Smirk Senior Member Join Date: Mar 2013 Posts: 1,153 Battle Record: 37-49 Rep Power: 2665830	Passing this faggot a loss, He aint got skills in lyrical dissing, Nobody cares about Greed right now, seasons about the spirit of giving. He lives under the stairs of his parents house, with no coin or crew, So staring at a basement wall, would be seeing things from his point of view vs My Kinect better, gave your Xbox one then after that you heard shouts Cause my drugs got her sweatin, while pilates made it hardly feel like a workout vote- Plot overall better hits/misses