01-10-2014, 11:24 PM | #81 |
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01-10-2014, 11:31 PM | #82 | |
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01-10-2014, 11:32 PM | #83 |
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I like oXus.
And he's a good writer. The Ego Bowl should be fun. It's the opposite of The Egg Bowl, which is the name of the football game between Mississippi and Mississippi State.
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01-10-2014, 11:32 PM | #84 |
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you're way off, bro. i've seen you use words in posts/verse i wouldn't touch. you're the kid in my class who insists he reads eight hours a day and then struggles to give an example of a metonym. too mechanical. your approach has been sideways for a minute, though. i'm about as smart as i think i am. which is about half as smart as i thought i was. youth and squandered potential is a strange thing.
it's all love. add. aquiline* maybe that's why you've taken issue. brb deleting posts Last edited by Eŋg; 01-10-2014 at 11:37 PM. |
01-10-2014, 11:34 PM | #85 | |
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01-10-2014, 11:37 PM | #86 | |
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Please point out one example of stretched vocabulary. Please point out one example of sideways approach to verses. I eagerly await. Very aquiline right now. Very aquiline. breathing earth and bleeding water right now.
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01-10-2014, 11:41 PM | #87 |
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01-10-2014, 11:43 PM | #88 |
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that was not an assessment of your character, lol. js the guy's a dick. and you. i don't know how much you read? i wouldn't say aquiline is stretched. it isn't even stilted. repost the part where you misspell it.
do you want the rest of that twice referenced verse? it's from '09. early stuff. your approach to me has been sideways. sorry bout your comprehension. i'm being pretentious and obscure i guess. +1 on wordplay. |
01-10-2014, 11:44 PM | #90 | |
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01-11-2014, 12:04 AM | #91 |
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LOL@not familiar.woth bags.
Lolindeed. The onternet.knows.me.niggah. im a fuckin rockstar w these keyboard. Washed up faggot. |
01-11-2014, 12:14 AM | #92 |
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NYC is top 5 doa with a synonym search. that's that nigga righ thurrrrr
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01-11-2014, 01:28 AM | #93 |
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01-11-2014, 06:33 AM | #94 |
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Damn, we killed that shit. I didn't even remember that or thought I wrote it til the weed stemmed memories part. I flipped too many styles back then.
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01-11-2014, 06:56 AM | #95 |
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Seeing bags in here is crazy. No offense. I just usually see him in discussion and battles.
When did u get ur account back?
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01-11-2014, 09:40 AM | #96 |
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ENUFF SMALL TALK. OPEN UR MOUTH.
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01-11-2014, 11:28 AM | #97 |
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word oxus the fucking champion
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Hi.
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01-11-2014, 11:43 AM | #99 |
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