Sharp Nine vs. Witty {Sharp Nine wins}

[Sn00p]

Round 2 Rules

Due Dates:
Verses are due Tuesday,
March 5th 2013 11:59 PM PST.
Voting ends Friday 11:59 PM PST.
(Battles that lack votes may close later.)
(One sided battles may get closed early.)
(Extensions can be no longer than 36 hours
and have to be granted by your opponent.)

Line Limit:
Min. = 10 lines
Max. = 16 lines
(The max. can be higher if different is agreed upon by both.)

Voting:
Must vote on 5 battles and post your links.
Post the links in the thread titled "Round 2 Voting Links".
You will be punished if you don't post all 5 voting links.
You will not like the punishment, so just vote so you
don't have to cry later.

General Rules:
1st person can't edit after the 2nd person posts.
2nd person can't edit after a vote has been made.
Feeding = DQ.
Recycling = DQ.
Biting = DQ.
No freeposting, swaying or bitching.
Competitors should agree on a line limit in their check in.
If no line limit is agreed on, then the 2nd person to post
MUST match the 1st person's line amount.

@Sharp Nine @Witty

[Sharp]

checkin, gl. 10 good?

@Sn00p heads up you got the round 1 stuff in the first post

[Sn00p]

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

checkin, gl. 10 good?

@Sn00p heads up you got the round 1 stuff in the first post

Word, thanks.

[Witty]

10 is cool....g'luck man.

[Witty]

I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass
He on split's dick, that's why split split, he friggin' hates him
This fag saw the name split 8, and took it as a sexual invitation
This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit
So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped
See bitch at this beef shit you're nothing..just a fan, a tourist
I told this boy to nail a chick, and he came back as a man...icurist
When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again
We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten

I'm out, that's 10.

[Sharp]

chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead
ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed
text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started
My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is
we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun
Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone
n you bump thrift shop? no way ur holdin tha win
already got my grandpa's style, those verses look older than him
guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded
you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started

[Camp Bell]

I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass
He on split's dick, that's why split split, he friggin' hates him
This fag saw the name split 8, and took it as a sexual invitation
This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit
So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped

vs

chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead
ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed
text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started
My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is
we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun
Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone


damn. this was close as fuck, both yall had great lines. you each had the same number of quotables
smh...i honestly wanna call draw but that wouldnt fly...ima read again...

[Camp Bell]

When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again
We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten

vs

guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded
you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started


ok. after reading this again, it came down to the closer and ima have to give the edge
to sharp nine. his closer was the better nameplay. dope shit fellas, this was a great battle.

vote: Sharp Nine

[Flow]

Originally Posted by Witty

I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass
This had my chuckling first time I saw it, read it a few times now and I still find it funny
He on split's dick, that's why split split, he friggin' hates him
This fag saw the name split 8, and took it as a sexual invitation
Again really funny - your style reminds me dumbfoundeads
This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit
So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped
Not feeling this, I mean you have since explained it to me but i still not a fan
See bitch at this beef shit you're nothing..just a fan, a tourist
I told this boy to nail a chick, and he came back as a man...icurist
this was pretty funny but could be used at anyone
When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again
We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten
nice name flips and close

I'm out, that's 10.

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead
ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed
nice opener and name flip
text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started
My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is
nice again liked this concept but could of been used on anyone
we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun
Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone
another nice concept and name flip
n you bump thrift shop? no way ur holdin tha win
already got my grandpa's style, those verses look older than him
nah didnt like this - really poor compared to the rest
guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded
you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started
Again nice concept but could of gone in harder

Ok this is going to be one of the better matches we get in this tourney. Witty came with some really funny punches and closed with a nice name flip, Sharp had a load of tasty concepts and name flips throughout. To be honest I can see Sharp going onto win this battle purely for having a better miss then the one witty had (highlighted red) but as I dont even consider a miss when I vote im swinging for Witty for making me laugh alot more with what he had. No hate at Sharp. Just found those first two punches from witty hillarious. I was actually surprised because Sharps usually the one for the major lols.

v/Witty

[Malachi]

I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass
lmao dope opener.
He on split's dick, that's why split split, he friggin' hates him
This fag saw the name split 8, and took it as a sexual invitation
coo
This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit
So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped
I dont know if this was a personal or not but it was cool
See bitch at this beef shit you're nothing..just a fan, a tourist
I told this boy to nail a chick, and he came back as a man...icurist
Nice, worded well
When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again
We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten
Cool closer, maybe couldve been executed better.


VS

chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead
ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed
Lol nice
text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started
My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is
this is aight, couldve hit harder
we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun
Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone
dope
n you bump thrift shop? no way ur holdin tha win
already got my grandpa's style, those verses look older than him
lol coo
guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded
you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started
great closer

Ahhh this was real close lol. I mean sharp had some nice hits Like his closer. And Witty hit hard and worded his bars well. This was a real dope match. ahh fuck this is hard. I enjoyed witty verse more but Sharp had nicer nameplays.

V/ Witty

Dope ass battle

[Utmost]

I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass
This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit
So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped

vs

chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead
ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed
text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started
My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is
we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun
Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone


Witty, ur opener was cool. when its said aloud it sounds better, than it actually reads. made me lol tho
stan shadys been down but i like how you flipped it with a nameplay.. closer coulda been nicer if it had been executed better. not a bad verse, rest of the lines were decent. Sharp pronounced wit was nice, outwit was predictable but i liked how you covered up the aha moment, setup was a lil eh tho. state of the art was kinda like wittys opener to me sounded better aloud. You trail off at the end of the verse, even the structure and flow was a bit diff. so im not sure what happened concepts were but the werent as fleshed out as your other lines.


v/ Sharp

[bleak]

Originally Posted by Witty

This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit
So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped
When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again
We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten

I'm out, that's 10.

Originally Posted by Sharp Nine

text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started
My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is
could have been hotter with lil tweaks, decent as is.
we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun
Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone
guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded
you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started

I'm giving Sharp 2.5 quotes. The nameplays were nice as stand alone punches. They lost some thunder with the repetition, but still effective. I feel like Witty played it a lil too safe, and could have opened up a lil more. The creativeness was lacking, and with one more decent punch he would have taken this. As it stands tho, I got Sharp in a cloooosssseeee one. BOTW for sure. Not that you had much comp for that title.

[Sn00p]

3-2, Sharp Nine. Up for more votes.

[Boredom]

i have sharp edging this w/ consistency,wording n concept choice.. overall just hit a little harder than witty.

[Dominate]

I've already won, so when I buck - blast - see him run fast
Sharp Nine? Guns are for shooting, not stabbing....dumbass
cool multies... name punch was okaaaaayyyy.... bit dull
He on split's dick, that's why split split, he friggin' hates him
This fag saw the name split 8, and took it as a sexual invitation
decent personal concept... worded alright
This wannabe Stan probably got a tattoo of Shady's name n shit
So is SN, Em? Nah, he just enjoys being chained and whipped
good, your best bar
See bitch at this beef shit you're nothing..just a fan, a tourist
I told this boy to nail a chick, and he came back as a man...icurist
concept's been done before but otherwise all the elements of a good bar were there... you just need concepts that aren't played - that will come with experience/being around for a while
When it comes to battling, you suck...u shud never be in a bout again
We all know 9 times out of 10, we'll see Nine down for a count of ten
not bad

Got some potential pal, keep dropping


chicks hate you, they go for this clever chap instead
ya girl fell for my 'pronounced wit'... so she never did that in bed
good nameflip, worded well
text is dying, but those drops say you never shoulda started
My verses are State of the Art, yours in a worse state than the art is
not bad
we're not fooled, ur gay posts in disc show you find fuckin guys plenty fun
Might as well come outWit... cause you're not not doing that to anyone
decent nameplay
n you bump thrift shop? no way ur holdin tha win
already got my grandpa's style, those verses look older than him
cool personal
guaranteed L, those shit jokes make us think this herb's retarded
you ain't got Sharp, Wit. But we knew that waaaay before this tourney started
cool double nameflip, well worded


Sharp showed a little more skill throughout his verse... he got it



v/ Sharp

[Hollywood]

opener, SN Em

vs.

opener, state of the art, outwit, closer

Sharp was damn consistent, good stuff. I could see him being a top contender type of guy pretty soon TBH, w/ some wording tune ups

Witty did his thing too, but it wasn't enough IMO

props to both, cool battle guys. V/Sharp 9