Week 9: 9. rhetoric (1-1) vs. 10. King Ra. (4-4) \\ rhetoric wins via no-show

Certain · 04-21-2014, 03:27 AM

Season 3

The Basics | Read the full rules here.

Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS.

Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT.

Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent.

Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread.

Topic

“The World Is Yours”

Good luck, @rhetoric and @King Ra.

King Ra. · 04-21-2014, 08:18 AM

Good luck, rhet.

rhetoric · 04-22-2014, 09:04 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by King Ra.

Good luck, rhet.

same to you bro

rhetoric · 04-25-2014, 11:09 PM

Could it be?
My creativity has stalled for so long
That the stick figures I drawn has spawned and moved on?
Every dawn i meet with a blank stare in my eye
To disappear inside myself like a flare in the sky
Asking why in cycles, the repetition repeats
Every mission to beat the tension is incomplete
Defeat seems to be breaking apart at the seams
My heart harbors a lake of incarcerated dreams
A means to an end? I failed to launch from the start
Courage harnessed out of reach marching in dark
It's a spark, a faint light flickering through a soul
A fight to never stop, give up and quit on a goal
Self control, barely keeping the variants clear
Hands worn to the bone keeping this chariot steered
Bury your fear, keep striving, embrace time
It only took one sunset to remind me. . . the world is mine

04-21-2014, 03:27 AM	#1
Certain Mad fucking dangerous. Join Date: Jul 2013 Posts: 12,072 Battle Record: 40-19 Champed - AOWL Season 3 - Art of Writing League (2x) Rep Power: 85899403	Week 9: 9. rhetoric (1-1) vs. 10. King Ra. (4-4) \\ rhetoric wins via no-show Season 3 The Basics \| Read the full rules here. Verses are due Friday at 11:59 p.m. PT. THERE ARE NO EXTENSIONS. Votes are due Sunday at 11:59 p.m. PT. Verses may not exceed 48 lines or 650 words unless agreed upon by the opponent. Voting on three battles is required. If you win and don't vote, you will receive a loss instead. If you lose and don't vote, you will receive a one-week suspension. Please post links to your three votes in this thread. Topic “The World Is Yours” Good luck, @rhetoric and @King Ra. __________________ I'm just swinging swords strictly based on keyboards, unbalanced like elephants and ants on seesaws.

04-21-2014, 08:18 AM	#2
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Good luck, rhet. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

04-25-2014, 11:09 PM	#4
rhetoric Junior Member Join Date: Apr 2014 Posts: 14 Battle Record: 2-1 Rep Power: 9625	Could it be? My creativity has stalled for so long That the stick figures I drawn has spawned and moved on? Every dawn i meet with a blank stare in my eye To disappear inside myself like a flare in the sky Asking why in cycles, the repetition repeats Every mission to beat the tension is incomplete Defeat seems to be breaking apart at the seams My heart harbors a lake of incarcerated dreams A means to an end? I failed to launch from the start Courage harnessed out of reach marching in dark It's a spark, a faint light flickering through a soul A fight to never stop, give up and quit on a goal Self control, barely keeping the variants clear Hands worn to the bone keeping this chariot steered Bury your fear, keep striving, embrace time It only took one sunset to remind me. . . the world is mine