Allen Knight vs. Amen {Allen Knight wins}

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@Allen Knight @Amen

[Allen Knight]

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Yerp.

Originally Posted by Knuchlehead in the 1-2 MAG

AK is one of the best heads active, but rushes almost everything

Mr. Allen Knight, who niggas claim drops scary text, but forced,
When it comes down to the Grand Scheme of things, you'll be buried next to yours.

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@Allen Knight

[Allen Knight]

The hos u get are hideous as fuck, check wat this lame started
Last bitch that amazon, look like she slitherd out the black lagoons of the rainforest

[Greed]

Grand scheme was a alright idea, but the punch itself didnt sting to me. Maybe it should of been 'in the grand scheme, yours is anything but that' or something. Idk. Ak line was solid.

V ak

[BROKE LESNAR]

Allen should have won this. The concept was great, wording was condensed and easy to read, it was humorous, and the delivery top to bottom was flawless. But there was a huge mistake that I couldn't overlook bc it was the primary component keeping the entire bar together, and that was the np. Amen and Amazon are pronounced differently. Aim-en/Aim-azon. That completely ruined it for me. I'm so pissed at you, AK. Rofl.

Amen's bar didn't have the same qualities as AK's, or I should say it wasn't constructed as well as his. The way the setup ended, it made it choppy enough to throw me off. BUT, I dug the concept and thought it was actually on the same level as AK's as far as being dope.

Had AK's np, being very important to the execution of his theme, hadn't been so big of an oversight, I would have easily voted for him.

But it's an oversight I can't ignore.

v-Amen

[Allen Knight]

Originally Posted by BROKE LESNAR

Allen should have won this. The concept was great, wording was condensed and easy to read, it was humorous, and the delivery top to bottom was flawless. But there was a huge mistake that I couldn't overlook bc it was the primary component keeping the entire bar together, and that was the np. Amen and Amazon are pronounced differently. Aim-en/Aim-azon. That completely ruined it for me. I'm so pissed at you, AK. Rofl.

Amen's bar didn't have the same qualities as AK's, or I should say it wasn't constructed as well as his. The way the setup ended, it made it choppy enough to throw me off. BUT, I dug the concept and thought it was actually on the same level as AK's as far as being dope.

Had AK's np, being very important to the execution of his theme, hadn't been so big of an oversight, I would have easily voted for him.

But it's an oversight I can't ignore.

v-Amen

I was just using am part of his name not his whole but ok

[BROKE LESNAR]

Yeah but even if you just use Am, it's either pronounced Aim or Ohm. Not Am as in Amazon.

So although -azon worked great, Aim-azon and Ohm-azon doesn't work. I'm not trying to be a dick here, man.

[Blanco Bishop]

Wording in aks was dope. Fluidity as well as great imagery was present buuut i couldnt make amen n amzon fit. As hard as i tried to look at it i just couldnt.

Amens wording was off but u get the meaning bhind the concept.

Vote amen

[El Muffin]

Oh shit I can totally see why ak would come up with that and become content with the result...

Hes using the am part of his name but made the mistake of not realizing that part of his name is pronounced aim instead of am. FUCK..this is some precedent setting shit right here. As a major advocate of wp im surprised I never ran into this problem. I bet allen had a oh fuck moment when the furst vote came in.

Coz that concept was great...just didnt work.


Amen ur shit was pretty good. Slightly above avg. Thought u cud have approached it differently but nevertheless it worked


V/amen

Feel bad for ak.

Hopefully we all learn suttin from this

The case of allen knight vs amen

Docket#13468

Lol

[Greed]

Niggas voting weird today. When is it ever aim-azon.

Its not ohm-en its ahmen, which is just about fucking right. Fuck you guys doing.

[BROKE LESNAR]

Originally Posted by Greed

Niggas voting weird today. When is it ever aim-azon.

Its not ohm-en its ahmen, which is just about fucking right. Fuck you guys doing.

That was exactly my point. It ISN'T aim-azon. It ISN'T ohm-azon. It ISN'T ahm-azon. It's AM-AZON. Do you pronounce Amen, AMen? No. It has never been pronounced AMen, so if you're pronouncing it AMen, you're doing it wrong.

[El Muffin]

Lol @Greed

Its either ah men

Or ay men

Amazon am ah zohn

Ahm men
Ay men

If your going to critique our votes at least know wut ur tlkn about


Ur fucking wrong

Js

[Malachi]

Hm this one was hard to vote for

i wasnt really feelin Amens but Allens was a reachh lol but the concept was good.

V/ amen

[Greed]

Ya'll niggas say amazon like some fucking faggots shut the hell up.

Greed's just trying to justify his dick riding antics. It's ok bro. I accept your hate votes all the time. Mother fucker votes against me every time, no matter if he's the only one hahaha.

[King Ra.]

Hmm, interesting. This was you can say was definitely close. For Amen, the 'grand scheme'/buried next to yours I get the concept you were going for, a personal shot, but this should have been worded differently to really make a bigger impact. But it was a solid attempt. AK, I also tried to dissect the Amazon play, but it doesn't really work in connection to your opponent. I get you using the first two letters of his name, but it is forced. But the bigger aspect is, lame started/rainforest do not rhyme at all. Surprised at how this one turned out.

MVGT: Amen. Good job by both competitors.

[Adonis]

I have no problem with the amazon thing, I did however not like you simply saying he gets ugly girls, although there was humor there. I liked the scheme, grave play though..

V amenzon