Adonis vs. jilti - [Jiliti wins]

~RustyGunZ~ · 07-19-2014, 07:36 AM

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Adonis · 07-19-2014, 09:07 AM

Lick ass

jilti · 07-19-2014, 10:09 PM

check

Adonis · 07-22-2014, 01:22 PM

You can out run a name play by creating such a whack moniker, but fuck your agility.
You can't out run your lack of ability to throw a soft jab to so much as tickle me lyrically.

jilti · 07-23-2014, 01:54 AM

Adonis supposed to be a mobster boss,ur just an imposter
if he's calling shots from the top, its to see who gets the ball first

BROKE LESNAR · 07-23-2014, 02:20 AM

Adonis gave it a good shot but I have jil taking this. Adonis, next time I would focus on one concept. Build on it. Structure ur bar around it, and make sure the rhyme scheme delivers it. Jil, I think that maybe focusing ur attention on adding subtle references to your main concept would help alot for the finish.

v-jil

King Ra. · 07-23-2014, 11:50 PM

Adonis, solid attempt here but your punch really lacked any sting. You could have came much harder off that set up, which was pretty solid to start. jilti, you had an okay bar overall. It wasn't bad, but it also wasn't good. Just okay. Better concept than your opponent though, and a bit more sting as well. Close.

MVGT: jilti. Good job by both competitors.

Camp Bell · 07-24-2014, 01:38 AM

adonis, your first line was coo then the second line got too wordy
i had to read it twice to get it and it was more like a statement
rather than a punch. good job

jilti, wasnt really feeling this either but, it was simple, original and
delivered well. just had no type of impact for me. good job

vote: jilti

Malachi · 07-24-2014, 06:15 PM

Adonis was too wordy and i didnt really get a punch from your bar.
Jiltil line was decent

V/ Jilt

Destroyer · 07-24-2014, 10:45 PM

Adonis, you're almost there. like, ur flow was solid, but the actual punch just fell flat
the setup hit harder than the punchline did
jilti was decent

v/jilt

Blanco Bishop · 07-25-2014, 10:52 AM

Adon . I actually liked your wording. It was clean. Unfortunately n ironically was a jab punch wise.

Jil. Calling shot wp is played.

I think this is a draw.

Meth · 07-27-2014, 06:44 PM

Adonis needed to clean his bar up.

Have the Jil here

Paradigm · 07-27-2014, 08:26 PM

6-0 jilti

07-19-2014, 07:36 AM	#1
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07-19-2014, 09:07 AM	#2
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	Lick ass __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-22-2014, 01:22 PM	#4
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946446	You can out run a name play by creating such a whack moniker, but fuck your agility. You can't out run your lack of ability to throw a soft jab to so much as tickle me lyrically. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR

07-23-2014, 11:50 PM	#7
King Ra. The Throne, The Crown Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,667 Battle Record: 21-35 Rep Power: 1932960	Adonis, solid attempt here but your punch really lacked any sting. You could have came much harder off that set up, which was pretty solid to start. jilti, you had an okay bar overall. It wasn't bad, but it also wasn't good. Just okay. Better concept than your opponent though, and a bit more sting as well. Close. MVGT: jilti. Good job by both competitors. __________________ Vetwork, bitches.

07-24-2014, 01:38 AM	#8
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	adonis, your first line was coo then the second line got too wordy i had to read it twice to get it and it was more like a statement rather than a punch. good job jilti, wasnt really feeling this either but, it was simple, original and delivered well. just had no type of impact for me. good job vote: jilti __________________ get high. write rhymes.

07-19-2014, 10:09 PM	#3
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	check

07-23-2014, 01:54 AM	#5
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816225	Adonis supposed to be a mobster boss,ur just an imposter if he's calling shots from the top, its to see who gets the ball first

07-23-2014, 02:20 AM	#6
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760961	Adonis gave it a good shot but I have jil taking this. Adonis, next time I would focus on one concept. Build on it. Structure ur bar around it, and make sure the rhyme scheme delivers it. Jil, I think that maybe focusing ur attention on adding subtle references to your main concept would help alot for the finish. v-jil

07-24-2014, 06:15 PM	#9
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877407	Adonis was too wordy and i didnt really get a punch from your bar. Jiltil line was decent V/ Jilt __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

07-25-2014, 10:52 AM	#11
Blanco Bishop Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Location: Cali Posts: 1,460 Battle Record: 11-20 Rep Power: 4150482	Adon . I actually liked your wording. It was clean. Unfortunately n ironically was a jab punch wise. Jil. Calling shot wp is played. I think this is a draw.

07-27-2014, 06:44 PM	#12
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489507	Adonis needed to clean his bar up. Have the Jil here __________________ Crystal

07-27-2014, 08:26 PM	#13
Paradigm ___________ Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: California Posts: 1,989 Battle Record: 4-4 Champed - The Ultimate Textcee - NBL Cypher Rep Power: 11033508	6-0 jilti