Greed vs. Adonis - Greed wins

Meth · 07-31-2014, 02:57 AM

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@Greed @Adonis

Adonis · 08-02-2014, 04:30 PM

Greed, ur on the rise, u gotta plate full just pace y'er self.
Cause bye George you'll crack under the pressure of ur heavy waisted wealth.

Greed · 08-02-2014, 07:32 PM

It should be a crime to be so wack, Adonis will be remembered as a bitch
Its set in stone, except your statutes of limitations is an actual never ending list

YDK · 08-06-2014, 03:39 AM

Both came off as worded awkwardly but I got Adonis getting this by a hair for the smoother execution an more effective punch

Window Taco · 08-06-2014, 01:05 PM

Adonis line was corny and didn't have an effective setup. Yet it's still better than greed's line which was piss poor IMO and the lame attempt at making it connect to set in stone was laughably bad IMO. So I gotta go with Adonis here.

V/ Adonis

BROKE LESNAR · 08-06-2014, 01:47 PM

I started to read Adonis' bar but I was too lazy and had to stop midpoint around "Greed, ur". I'm sure the rest of it was dope. I liked Greed's statutes of limitations concept. Was something fresh to me.

v-Greed

jilti · 08-06-2014, 02:03 PM

Adonis had a nice set up going but then the punch just fell flat
Greed had an ok punch, which is enough to take this
V/Greed

Adonis · 08-06-2014, 03:39 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by BROKE LESNAR

I started to read Adonis' bar but I was too lazy and had to stop midpoint around "Greed, ur". I'm sure the rest of it was dope. I liked Greed's statutes of limitations concept. Was something fresh to me.

v-Greed

I see what you did, but if you want to hate vote like that we can. Holler bish

BROKE LESNAR · 08-06-2014, 04:26 PM

If you see what I did then you would know my reason in doing so. I obviously read your entire bar and voted accordingly.

Malachi · 08-06-2014, 09:24 PM

V/Greed

His bar was ight, I didnt reallly feel like there was much of a punch in adonis bar though

Camp Bell · 08-06-2014, 09:38 PM

lmaooo

adonis, really had to kindve think about your bar
then it still was kinda off a bit, not sure who or
what george is, if its used to add to the rhyme
then nope. greed, yours was kinda out there as
well but it made me chuckle a little bit. plus, i saw
what you did immediately.

vote: greed

Destroyer · 08-06-2014, 10:04 PM

I got greed even tho he worded that shit horribly

why not just say 'it'd be set in stone if ur statute of limitations wasn't a neverending list?'

Greed · 08-07-2014, 03:04 AM

It was more of an adonis statue line with crime being the obvious tie in to wackness.

Adonis · 08-08-2014, 01:13 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Greed

It was more of an adonis statue line with crime being the obvious tie in to wackness.

Whack nothing kid. I don't battle. Could write and spit a verse on beat over you all day.

Never was keen on battling. It never held my attention, it seems easy. Ironic cuz I suck. But constructing a dis is just easier Imo than constructing a relevant verse that people actually listen to on there free time.

Adonis · 08-08-2014, 01:16 AM

Also. Battle closed.

Plate full. Pacer (pace y'er) self,. Crack under pressure (Paul George) like Greed$ fat ass (heavy waist/heavy waisted)

Sounded Fucking awesome to me.

07-31-2014, 02:57 AM	#1
Meth Back again. Join Date: Aug 2011 Posts: 2,653 Battle Record: 12-5 Champed - Time to Kill IV - 1-2 Punch Panic Room Rep Power: 4489509	Greed vs. Adonis - Greed wins The 1-2 Punch League Due Monday Midnight Pacific Standard Time @Greed @Adonis __________________ Crystal

08-02-2014, 04:30 PM	#2
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946447	Greed, ur on the rise, u gotta plate full just pace y'er self. Cause bye George you'll crack under the pressure of ur heavy waisted wealth. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR Last edited by Adonis; 08-02-2014 at 04:32 PM.

08-06-2014, 03:39 AM	#4
YDK ghost in the matrix Join Date: Apr 2013 Location: Covington, KY Posts: 4,564 Battle Record: 14-25 Champed - Art of Writing League (x2) - Lime Green Poetry Association Rep Power: 8181111	Both came off as worded awkwardly but I got Adonis getting this by a hair for the smoother execution an more effective punch __________________

08-06-2014, 01:05 PM	#5
Window Taco can I help u? Join Date: Jun 2014 Posts: 236 Battle Record: 0-4 Rep Power: 888972	Adonis line was corny and didn't have an effective setup. Yet it's still better than greed's line which was piss poor IMO and the lame attempt at making it connect to set in stone was laughably bad IMO. So I gotta go with Adonis here. V/ Adonis __________________ aka windu tuako

08-06-2014, 09:24 PM	#10
Malachi Negus Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 2,530 Battle Record: 5-10 Champed - Newbie Tourney VI Rep Power: 82877408	V/Greed His bar was ight, I didnt reallly feel like there was much of a punch in adonis bar though __________________ Seen the spectrum through the prisms

08-02-2014, 07:32 PM	#3
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975685	It should be a crime to be so wack, Adonis will be remembered as a bitch Its set in stone, except your statutes of limitations is an actual never ending list

08-06-2014, 01:47 PM	#6
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760962	I started to read Adonis' bar but I was too lazy and had to stop midpoint around "Greed, ur". I'm sure the rest of it was dope. I liked Greed's statutes of limitations concept. Was something fresh to me. v-Greed

08-06-2014, 02:03 PM	#7
jilti neckties Join Date: Jul 2014 Posts: 1,629 Battle Record: 43-19 Champed - BA Cypher - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 20816226	Adonis had a nice set up going but then the punch just fell flat Greed had an ok punch, which is enough to take this V/Greed

08-06-2014, 04:26 PM	#9
BROKE LESNAR βгοкε ㄴεςηαг Join Date: Jun 2013 Posts: 2,245 Battle Record: 9-4 Champed - 1-2 Punch League Rep Power: 12760962	If you see what I did then you would know my reason in doing so. I obviously read your entire bar and voted accordingly.

08-06-2014, 09:38 PM	#11
Camp Bell Senior Member Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 733 Battle Record: 10-18 Rep Power: 0	lmaooo adonis, really had to kindve think about your bar then it still was kinda off a bit, not sure who or what george is, if its used to add to the rhyme then nope. greed, yours was kinda out there as well but it made me chuckle a little bit. plus, i saw what you did immediately. vote: greed __________________ get high. write rhymes.

08-07-2014, 03:04 AM	#13
Greed Raw Join Date: Jan 2013 Posts: 1,727 Battle Record: 21-40 Rep Power: 29975685	It was more of an adonis statue line with crime being the obvious tie in to wackness.

08-08-2014, 01:16 AM	#15
Adonis Tsk Tsk Join Date: Feb 2013 Location: Beer Goggles Posts: 4,834 Battle Record: 36-34 Champed - Lime Green Poetry Association - NFL Pick'em 2016-17 Rep Power: 9946447	Also. Battle closed. Plate full. Pacer (pace y'er) self,. Crack under pressure (Paul George) like Greed$ fat ass (heavy waist/heavy waisted) Sounded Fucking awesome to me. __________________ I'm tryna fuck like A-don-is TUPAC SHAKUR