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08-29-2014, 12:34 AM
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Mad fucking dangerous.
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I SAW YOU CHUMMING WITH VETS, SEEMS YOU'RE DYSLEX'D, DORK.
CHARLOTTE HAS A NEW TEAM NAME, BUT THIS MKG'S A NET WHORE. |
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08-29-2014, 01:23 AM
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http://www.nbcnews.com/news/sports/u...rescue-n190601
Stop lying saying you either rush ya verse or don't try, truth is ya styles soft Just keep it real with US C, you look dumber than him lying about how u fell off |
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08-29-2014, 05:16 PM
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Back again.
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Voting certain
Mkg dawg... Not only did u link us to a current event (don't) but then u fucked up the word play. U want us to read it as US but think wow he put a c after it like U.S.C. Just doesn't work. Points for also mentioning my boy Kidd gilchrist
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08-29-2014, 05:31 PM
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βгοкε ㄴεςηαг
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MKG, I liked the direction you went with your concept, but the np/wp itself was too vague. Instead of going with the USC approach maybe you could have played off his name or the situation itself. I have no problem with you linking for context, I just thought when you said look dumber than him lying ab why you fell off, you used the USC np/wp to connect it and the USC connection was very generalized.
I liked Certain's MKG reference and np. It was a rocky delivery tho. I thought MKG did a much better job with his delivery and building up his concept. And idk if dyslex'd is a word lol. v-Certain |
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09-01-2014, 09:49 AM
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Kill.It.Nonstop
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Word....cert...set up was.kinda eh...but.punch was straight
M...that us c shit threw me.off...set up nice tho...but.didnt.really.work Vote Certain for certain |
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09-01-2014, 12:51 PM
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V cert.
Usc don't work. Could of been dope but wasnt executed properly. Remember to never explain with articles. Most of us are up to date with current events or can Google shit. Cert was decent n took this easy. |
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09-02-2014, 02:44 PM
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Top Shotta
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MGK could have been way better but it was all over the place, certain was coo
V/cer |
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09-02-2014, 11:15 PM
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baz∞ka
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MKG's wordplay didn't work as he planned so it was a total miss,
not a fan of Certs bar but it was enough to get the win... v/Certain |
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09-03-2014, 10:18 PM
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HE / HIM / FRAC
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USC/us C didnt quite work for me tho I love where it was coming from
certain had a cool play giving this to certain but I want to see more from MKG v/certain
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