08-29-2014, 10:29 AM | #2 |
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sad to say 'Stro dont fancy dames, wont even glance their way
if Design a girl, its hand crocheting pastel fabric patterns for fashion day |
08-29-2014, 12:45 PM | #3 |
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des gets mad trim, while u turn to ur hand for a thrill
s'why u don't have to go up a fuckin hill to find jackin Jil |
08-29-2014, 04:39 PM | #4 |
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jilti: This was very solid for this league. The name play worked, and the setup went with it. My only critique is that I think the way you followed the name play was a bit weird and drawn out, mostly because of "fashion day."
Destroyer: Your wording was a bit smoother than jilti's, but your name play wasn't as clever. I think if your rhyme had been more than a single syllable end-rhyme, I might have been able to say the slightly lesser punch was enough because of the execution. Vote: jilti
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08-29-2014, 06:42 PM | #5 |
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Okay so this one is a hard battle to judge for me. Jil, here is the best reason I can offer why I wasn't feeling the np. Design is what, a two-syllable word right? De-sign. What you did was you tried to fit another 2-syllable word into the second half of the word using "ign". Eye-ing. What you tried to do was Des-eyeing..but what it comes off as is Des-Eyen (pronounced "ine" as in "shine"). So Design is a 2-syllable word. Eyeing is a 2-syllable word, and you're using 3 letters to make that happen. "Ign" and "eyeing" doesn't work imo. This, even though everything else ab ur bar was great, collapses the entire concept bc it was built around the np.
Destroyer, in my eyes, should have won bc of this. BUT I'm a very principled guy, and I have to be consistent, or at least try my hardest to lol. Last week there was a repeat Vivian Banks concept, and due to the concept already being used in this league I had to vote against it no matter how much better it was than the previous versions or his opponents.I liked the way he flipped the concept and how smooth and effortless it connected. But I cannot vote for his bar considering the jack n jill np has already been used before in this league. v-Jil |
08-29-2014, 06:59 PM | #6 |
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good battle here. felt Des had a pretty good punch that woulda been fire had he set it up better. jilti punch was solid from jump imo.
v/jil |
08-30-2014, 11:28 PM | #7 |
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I gotta give it to jil here based on the fact d used the same concept that's been used a lot already. I'm bad a reusing my concepts I think are creative when I'm uninspired an feel this was the case here as well
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08-30-2014, 11:31 PM | #8 |
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V des
Id rather see a played punch that actually works then a horribly forced nameplay I hate the 1-2 specifically due to every1 writing awful forced nameplays every week. Blegh. Fuck this league. |
08-30-2014, 11:36 PM | #9 |
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fucking gone @ @BROKE LESNAR becoming a linguistics major after champing the league
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08-30-2014, 11:37 PM | #10 |
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- smush parker like bb comment on instagram saying "u fucka suck idiyote"
- smush beer on head and didn't cry
- parallel parked in between 2 ferrari's in tonky truck once
- when saying pledge of allegiance i said "i don't" lmao deadass bb satan
- won tshirt from taco bell saying "taco cat" is the same backwards for filling out 500 surveys in a
- neighbor house caught on fire i call FIRE department and saved lives, was in newspaper
- set neighbor house on fire lmao
- fuck neighbor husband and wife
- first fish caught resembled david ortiz
- colin kaepernick
- related to genghis khan
- elected assistant to the vice president assistant to the president for regional chess club
- never lost game of hide and seek
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@Bags all des had to do was not use a jack and jill nameplay
literally ALL he had to do and he aint do it v/jil |
08-31-2014, 01:06 AM | #11 |
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Thiz was dope..
J... like how made a punch with a nameplay that makes u think twice about it...actually had to re read an pronounce design juz right....sick Des... same.style of punch...pretty nice nameplay...I know how.nice u are...an thiz was a lil subpar from wha im used to seein from u in my opinion Vote...J Both alwayz bring that heat tho |
08-31-2014, 10:24 AM | #12 |
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lol bags v/des even tho is punch was used 2 days ago
WHAT IS LOVE Babee dnt hurt meee
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08-31-2014, 04:16 PM | #13 |
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Muff furious everyday at me now that i exposed him for being a lonely virgin who logs into nc an pretends hes nkt a friendless fat halfrican.
Lol. Post the pic u lying coward. |
09-02-2014, 12:29 PM | #14 |
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Both were cool des just hit a lil harder imo
V/des |
09-03-2014, 12:53 AM | #15 |
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Des should have lost
Jilti should have won But that is forced as fuck to me. I can give benefit of the doubt usually. But man. V/ des
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