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08-29-2014, 12:39 AM
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Windu Tuako vs. RudeBoy - Windu Tuako wins
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08-29-2014, 11:06 AM
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08-29-2014, 08:55 PM
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08-30-2014, 01:32 AM
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My foe's a fag! so when I'm grabbing on chics that lick my hard log right/
"Rude have a nigga's face on his dick" like "Ravishing Rick's Junkyard Dog tights!!"/
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09-02-2014, 07:16 AM
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Come on son, u a bum when u spit, Jedi mind tricks get put 2 bed
The force is definitely w/ u, how wording n concepts just Skywalks over ur head |
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09-02-2014, 07:52 AM
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Windu...if rick rude was the junkyard dog then this woulda been ok....but I dont really get the connection....set up was pretty basic too
Rude...dope set.up...wordplay...an hit hard.. Easy Vote...rude |
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09-02-2014, 10:18 AM
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Both were oddly worded.
Win was really messy tho. Rude was a little better. Played but better. V rude |
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09-02-2014, 12:40 PM
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This was a dope battle, but in my eyes there is a clear and decisive winner. Windu was fucking ill. That Ravishing Rick Rude line was roflz and just altogether an excellent bar.. Great reference. Keep doing shit just like this. Don't get too abstract. Rude was good too but creatively I would say Windu had this.
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09-02-2014, 03:47 PM
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Windu Tuako: Awesome reference, one of the few obscure-ish wrestling references that I get. The wording needed to be cleaner, but I liked the punchline.
RudeBoy: I've seen a lot of Skywalker wordplay, like probably more than 20 lines invoking that concept in one way or another. Your wording was better, and I liked that you incorporated the Mace Windu aspect to a degree. But the punch was too played. Vote: Windu Tuako
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09-04-2014, 03:34 PM
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The skywalker line didn't connect at all for me because you didn't connect it really
The sky part was just added to make it skywalks. No reason or suntan ce to why it was there The wrestling line was very sloppy shouldn't have said "when" in ur set up V/ Tuako for the better attempt tho
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