08-29-2014, 06:55 PM | #2 |
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09-01-2014, 06:00 PM | #3 |
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meth bars always go no where, u body ya self for me
your punches have such a slow development, news reporters would abandon the story |
09-02-2014, 10:07 PM | #4 |
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KnowP aka Jay aka fat punches are played...
Let's Dance Being big has kept you down, he loves mayonnaise sandwiches and sides of bologna I've tried to help him up but every Subjacent down his throat leaves him further below me lol
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09-02-2014, 10:44 PM | #5 |
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lmaoo
know your rhyme was off, body ya self for me/abandon the story and, i think the fact that you misspelled words (purposely or not) hurt the wording. meth good bar. solid rhymes, legit nameplay. good shit. nicely executed even as a fat joke. vote: meth
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09-02-2014, 11:02 PM | #6 |
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KnowP: Your punchline begs the punch. That wording was so drawn out it got to be tedious, and the setup was clumsy. But mostly, the line didn't connect. It wasn't harsh or funny or clever, really. It was bland.
Meth: Your punchline begs the puncher. Also, the "mayonnaise sandwiches and sides of bologna" part of your setup was clumsy. But what you had that KnowP didn't was a pretty clever punchline. Both of you need to quit calling the kettle black. Vote: Meth
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09-02-2014, 11:25 PM | #7 |
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Meth had a nice flow, good wordplay and solid hit,
Know had a Alright bar but just wasn't enough imo.. v/Meth |
09-02-2014, 11:35 PM | #8 |
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I liked KP's even though the flow was choppy. I'm a bit of a news junkie so it struck a chord with me. Meth's was really funny, and I liked the support he afforded to the concept. Very rounded. LOL @ us both using 2 variations of balogna/baloney
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09-03-2014, 01:36 AM | #9 |
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Knowp was cool here. Wording was a little sketchy. Meth came with a clean hit here.
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09-03-2014, 07:54 PM | #10 |
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v/meth
know was str8 but meth wp was nice..soo v meth
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09-03-2014, 10:11 PM | #11 |
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I thought the punches themselves were relatively equal so I edge this one to meth on a little better wording. good battle
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09-04-2014, 09:48 AM | #12 |
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This was a lot closer than the votes say, but I still gotta give to Meth for the fresh wp here
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